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  • Pretty good

    You could have added more examples for support, and your thesis seemed kind of rushed. Overall it was a good essay, and it was very informative.
    • 20/06/2006
    • 21:08:38
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative.

    Your essay was really informative, I am a cat owner and to people who do that are sick and horrible people, I'm not blaming the Vets. I want to become a vet. and make that my career, thank you for this essay I really didn't know people did that. It was really good, nice job with your words makes you sound like you know what your talking about!
    • 11/01/2006
    • 21:43:34
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • From the author

    hey guys, i'm sry but i dont think i can finish part 4 soon, i'm leaving to go on vacation tommorow but i promise when i come back part 4 and 5 will be done, thanks a lot to all of u! good and bad comments are appriciated!love alwaysHanna
    • 05/07/2005
    • 17:24:51
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • OMG

    I TOTALLY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! no lie, it's soo great, the story just grabs u and pulls u in! great job! i can't wait for the rest of it!
    • 04/07/2005
    • 15:40:39
    • Score: 17 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
  • Thank you ccmustangs2001

    i just reread it and your right it is better to start a new paragraph when a new person is speaking, thank for you comment, it was very helpful.
    • 04/05/2005
    • 21:41:09
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • OMG!

    this is the best peice of poetry i have read all day!!! u did a great job! i defently like ur style, and i defenetly love the way u choose ur words and made them flow with each other, once again great job! this peice is worth more than just one smily face! keep up the great work!
    • 22/02/2005
    • 23:57:57
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Weird

    u r very detailed an all, but this topic wasn't something u should have written about, it's a bit weird, so all i have to say is no comment.
    • 06/11/2004
    • 12:04:20
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Diet

    interesting, i like this one the most out of the other ones, i didnt kno a diet like thins was real, well ne ways good job, this was very interesting and helpful (even tho i'm not gonna do this diet) i thought it was very good, great job!
    • 02/11/2004
    • 17:30:54
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Macbeth

    very kool, i saw the play it was great, i like how u explain the play, i also like the way you add some of ur comments into the essay, it wasnt boring, it was nice and interesting, keep up the great work.
    • 02/11/2004
    • 17:21:18
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good things never last

    very true, this is the funniest essay i ever read!!!!!!!!! it's hysterical and sad, but i agree with u lon the part wher eu said take things as they come, that's true, ne ways great job, and essay just made my day, once again kool essay.
    • 01/11/2004
    • 15:57:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    really good, interesting dialouge, smart and creative great job!
    • 28/10/2004
    • 19:17:25
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • The perfect alibi

    very kool, it was interesting and it had a twist to it! it was a perfect alibi, but i think you could have fixed the ending a bit, but other than that iot was really good, it was funny and crazy i loved it great job!
    • 28/10/2004
    • 16:21:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Please Be Honest With Me Even If It Hurts Me

    this is sooo good, i like this one more than your other one, i can relate to this one more, you did a wonderful job, great job once again and keep up the great work.
    • 25/09/2004
    • 16:21:46
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Just a little longer.

    What the hell just happened! This peice is amazing!!! I mean it's so great, you did a really good job, it all flows together, and it makes perfect sense, I wasn't confused, again great job!
    • 25/09/2004
    • 16:15:13
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Great!

    you did a great job, i think i'm going to rent this movie, you made very interesting points, great job, i think your opions were very good, and you made a very good summary of the movie, also i like how you described the characters, once again great work!
    • 24/09/2004
    • 17:54:37
    • Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    this story is very detailed i can just picture the gurl sitting there ready to run, great job!!! i think this is one of ur best essays yet, keep up the great work!
    • 20/09/2004
    • 19:51:42
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Super granny

    creative, thats the first thought that came to me after i read this! great job, maybe u should write a chapter tow, great job once again and keep up the good work,
    • 19/09/2004
    • 19:26:02
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Holden

    great essay! i am left speachless, this is very good, you also make good points, this is one book i am interesting in reading, you did a really good job, you were clear and also you were direct you didn't confuse the audiance at all. great job keep up the great work!
    • 15/09/2004
    • 20:03:50
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    i totally agree with u, u did a great job, and you presented your essay with very good ideas, and you were very fair and argumenative, great job!
    • 12/09/2004
    • 19:47:49
    • Score: 4 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Hermes

    before i read this i didnt kno half the things you talked about, you did a great job, this was very interesting to read. i think you could have made it longer, but other wise it was very good, you knew what you were talking about, and you were clear, once again great job and keep up the great work!
    • 11/09/2004
    • 17:28:43
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    very good, i learned so much, u did a great job, i'm interested in learning more about this author, once again great job!
    • 11/09/2004
    • 14:31:07
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Here i stand

    i dont kno wut to say, this is very good! i love it, i couldnt srop reading, its like a great book, you have to kno wut happens! great job! and kep up the great work!
    • 10/09/2004
    • 18:20:27
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • The Boy

    this is such a good peice, i almost cried! tihs is the best thing i read so far today, you did an outstand job, i'm blow away by the detail, and how real this seemed, i could picture the boy get hit by the dad and when he hugged his mother, you did a great job, keep up the great work!
    • 10/09/2004
    • 17:57:12
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    this piece is very interesting, it was also very useful. you did a great job, i really the use of your vobaulary, great job, and keep up the great work.
    • 08/09/2004
    • 18:32:18
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • From the author

    sry about all the errors, and thanks fro reading my story #3 is on its way!
    • 05/09/2004
    • 15:00:40
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Mirror

    great! i love the wait you rymhe, and how it all makes sense bueaty is skin beep and you did a perfect job with this poem!
    • 28/08/2004
    • 14:32:30
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Mureder mysteries

    very good, u were very persuasive, i think i want to read one of those books now, i like how you decribe one mystery, and then you easy lead us into another one without getting off topic. great job, keep up the great work.
    • 27/08/2004
    • 13:40:54
    • Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree with u sileas451

    i think u r rite, America is not perfect, even tho i was born and raised in Cali, i have learned to see how much wrong the president(s) have been doing. i think u could have done a better job, nothing is perfect, u should have stated the flaws of America, if u can't think of ne i have a whole list of things.
    • 27/08/2004
    • 13:21:01
    • Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    i would like to say thank you to everyone, ur comments r every much appreceated, damn i cant spell, ne ways, thank u again, and larrylovenduonofit, i wouldnt be so sure about that.
    • 23/08/2004
    • 17:29:20
    • Score: 16 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
  • Abortion

    i think abortion is wrong and not cuz everyone thinks so, and not because some book says its wrong, i think its wrong because u r killing something that could do something useful, and u kno that baby can be a gift or a punishment it depends on how u look at it, its a persons fault for having sex wen they arent even married yet, and y go through abortion y not give the baby up for adoption, ur essay was well formated, and it was interesting to read.
    • 20/08/2004
    • 23:34:25
    • Score: 9 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    u did a great job, this makes me want to read book or play, u did an excelent job, i think u could have explaned more about antonio, even the small details becasue it would help us understand him better, but over all u did a great job.
    • 19/08/2004
    • 20:59:55
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Palistine

    i agree with u, if only ppl saw wut really goes on over there then they will really understand, i think u did a good job, but u could have talked a lil more, and added more opions of ur own since u did say this is not in essay form, but others wise very good.
    • 18/08/2004
    • 21:39:51
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Part 2

    this is very intense, i cant wait for part 3, i like this a lil more because it explains more, i think u did a great job!
    • 14/08/2004
    • 15:42:02
    • Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    amazing! i love t, its so good, and u made it very deatailed, u did a great job, i cant wait 4 part 2, keep up the great work.
    • 12/08/2004
    • 11:31:55
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Teen preg

    i kno i thought the same thing final, but wen i read the reasher books over again it made sense, at first it didnt add up, but theni read the side notes.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 22:51:43
    • Score: 18 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
  • Poem study

    very good, i didnt kno ne of this, u were informative, and i like how u were detailed, u did a great job, keep up the great work.
    • 04/08/2004
    • 14:44:21
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    this essay is informaive, most of the things u stated i never knew.i think u did a great job, though there r somethings i didnt understand, i think u could have made things a lil bit clear, but overall u did a great job.
    • 03/08/2004
    • 11:46:42
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    this is a very good peice, i liked it, but i rember reading something like this but it was in an old day kinda of a time, but over all i really liked it, very interesting to read. great work!
    • 28/07/2004
    • 12:33:08
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Rock bottom.

    a very good short story, it was detailed, but i think you could have added a few more details, like how Ernie looks, and what color the pigeons eyes are, to add a more realistic feeling to it. but overall i think you did a great job, and i think you should make a part 2 unless you killed Ernie, cuz i dont kno if he fell or if he landed on the other side, u didnt really make that point clear, well ne ways great work!
    • 22/07/2004
    • 17:02:55
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Silent mill

    i think u did a good job, but u could have done more to make the girl to seem to evil and kinda at the same time, for example you should have said that she looked like the boy that tried to kill you, then you should have made her seem pretty, but wicked. i thik that would have helped you.i think u did a great job.
    • 21/07/2004
    • 15:00:39
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Sad

    this is has many emotions, it was short but i really liked it, i kno how u feel, i think u could have made thia a bit longer, and added a few more things to it, keep up the great work, and keep writting.
    • 19/07/2004
    • 14:46:46
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Moon tears

    i really like this, it's short, but it has a lot of emotion in it, and i really liked that, u did a great job!
    • 19/07/2004
    • 14:27:49
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    a bit short, but very persuasive and your point is clear, i agree with u totally. Bush is a big fat liar!!! sry to all those ppl who agree with wut he is doing. but i think u have a point and i also think u did a great job!
    • 18/07/2004
    • 20:00:59
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Ernest hemingway

    u did a great job, u made a few small spelling errors, but this peice was very well written and i think u did a great job, keep up the great work!
    • 18/07/2004
    • 19:44:27
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    the story was pretty intence, but i hope that this isn't the final story, because this ending wasn't all that great, i'm sure u could have done better. but so far the story was pretty good.
    • 18/07/2004
    • 12:56:02
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    this is a very interesting story, u made a few spelling errors, but the story was still good, i think u could have added more to the 16 year old boy's story about the town and why it's called silent mill. keep writing, u r doing great!
    • 16/07/2004
    • 13:09:14
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • THANK U!!!

    omg you don't kno how many essay have been submitted with false statements about Islam! but ur essay had true state ments, it was short but it went to the point i really think u did a great job!
    • 05/07/2004
    • 23:53:24
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    it was a really good story, except the eding was kinda werid, i think you could have done a better job, oh and you put hip instead of ship, all in all the story was well written but the ending needs some work. good job.
    • 21/06/2004
    • 10:25:58
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    well done, u did a good job, i agree with ur points, and wut u say makes perfect sense, keep up the good work.
    • 20/06/2004
    • 19:22:02
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    you have a very good point and, i agree with the theories, you did a great job, you werent all that persuasive but all in all it was a very good essay, great work!
    • 20/06/2004
    • 19:10:32
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    this is a very good essay, it is informative, and it is apparent that too did a lot of research, you did a great job!
    • 18/06/2004
    • 19:10:05
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Crest of the green leaf

    this is very good, and interesting, it was detailed and wonderful, keep up the great work!
    • 17/06/2004
    • 12:58:35
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    i would just like to say thank you to everyone who rated or commented on my essay, thanks a bunch!
    • 16/06/2004
    • 18:02:24
    • Score: 14 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    wut is up with everyone writeing false statements about Muslims, if your not sure just ask someone who is, or just get the Holly Book and read it, dont lie about us, cuz it makes us look bad if u give false statements. but it was interestng to read.
    • 13/06/2004
    • 14:10:59
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    it was good, but u were wrong about us wearing red on our wedding day, we wear white, and the men do cook, it is apperent that you did a lot of research, but not many of your statements are true.
    • 13/06/2004
    • 13:58:51
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Lover

    well done, you did an exulant job. this is a well written essay, keep up the great work!
    • 12/06/2004
    • 13:34:23
    • Score: 40 out of 45 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    this is a very fantstic piece, well written, and it was interesting to read, i dont think i ever read ne thing like it. keep up the great work!
    • 10/06/2004
    • 21:31:21
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    it was very interesting to read, u did a nice job on this, keep up the great work1
    • 10/06/2004
    • 21:28:19
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • GREAT

    this is fantastic, its great, u did a great job! i really like this essay, its breath taking, it was amazing to read. i really think out did ur self this time!
    • 10/06/2004
    • 19:55:23
    • Score: 40 out of 46 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree

    i agree with your opinion, and this essay is very well written, i think you did a great job, in my opinion i dislike Bush and what he did to those ppl. he had no right, and he still did not find those "wepons" he was talking about. ne ways great job!
    • 10/06/2004
    • 18:06:35
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    well done, i liked it, it was very infomrative. good job.
    • 09/06/2004
    • 18:06:34
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    i think tis is a good essay, very interesting, i liked it, it was very informative, u did a good job.
    • 09/06/2004
    • 17:51:28
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    i really liked ur biography, i agree with johnjjp, u did a good job.
    • 09/06/2004
    • 17:39:19
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Great work

    another one of your great pieces of work johnjjp. you did a really good job! i liked it a lot.this essay is well written, and well detailed. keep up the good work!
    • 09/06/2004
    • 17:31:41
    • Score: 58 out of 62 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    this is very informative well done!
    • 08/06/2004
    • 18:28:46
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    good job, it was nicely formated, and your statements were rite down to the point!
    • 08/06/2004
    • 17:33:46
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Animal farm

    i read this book it was pretty much ok, but the ending kinda sucked. ne ways you did a good job, wel done.
    • 08/06/2004
    • 17:31:51
    • Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    i really liked it, it was way kool, great poem!
    • 08/06/2004
    • 17:26:39
    • Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Uniforms

    uniforms are bad we should not have to wear them, because what we wear expresses who we are and if we all wear the same thing then o one will really be unique in what they wear, over all it was a pretty kool essay. good work.
    • 07/06/2004
    • 21:16:04
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    this is interesting, and informative, i liked it, it was pretty kool
    • 07/06/2004
    • 19:52:53
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    it's kool, i liked the list it helped me understand it better, the ex, were helpful
    • 07/06/2004
    • 18:26:36
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    i really liked ur essay and i agree with you, you did a great job, keep up the good work, i like how u put the definitons at the end.
    • 07/06/2004
    • 17:39:52
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    i think u did a good job, it was quite informative, good job!
    • 07/06/2004
    • 17:35:46
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    i really liked this peice it was interesting, and very well written, it's pretty kool, you did a great job!
    • 06/06/2004
    • 21:46:04
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Animals

    it was hard to read, but i guess it was ok, good job.
    • 06/06/2004
    • 21:23:38
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • The busch reference

    you did a good job i liked it, keep up the good work
    • 06/06/2004
    • 18:26:59
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    i really think u did an excellent job, most wonderful i like how u talked about how Emily was and how she changed and how things around her changed
    • 06/06/2004
    • 17:50:34
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    this is very interesting, you did a good job, i agree with what you say.
    • 06/06/2004
    • 17:43:34
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    your essay is very well stated
    • 06/06/2004
    • 17:04:29
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    this is very informative you did a nice job, some of the things u said i didnt know about b4, ne ways keep up the good work.
    • 06/06/2004
    • 15:05:18
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    u did an excellent job!
    • 05/06/2004
    • 19:22:21
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    b4 this essay i didnt even kno wut globalization was ok maybe i did but u did a good job!
    • 05/06/2004
    • 18:39:52
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good

    this is very very interesting you did a great job!
    • 05/06/2004
    • 13:46:51
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    great job, very good, i liked it a lot
    • 05/06/2004
    • 13:25:22
    • Score: 13 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
  • Welll done

    this is very good, i couldnt stop reading this, u did a great job keep up the great work!
    • 05/06/2004
    • 13:23:21
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    good job, ur very informative and ur essay is very well written, u did a great job.
    • 04/06/2004
    • 22:12:32
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • WOW

    this is sooo interesting its soo sad tooo, it is very very good, i'm sry she died.
    • 04/06/2004
    • 21:57:28
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    this is a very good peice, it was interesting tio read
    • 04/06/2004
    • 21:25:21
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    i think the ending of the telltale heart is ironic but was very interesting to read u did a good job on this keep up the good work
    • 04/06/2004
    • 21:22:31
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    wow i never knew that b4 thats so kool, u did a great job!
    • 04/06/2004
    • 19:31:25
    • Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good

    very good i likeit a lot, keep up the good work
    • 03/06/2004
    • 19:57:12
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good

    this is interesting and it has a twist very kool
    • 02/06/2004
    • 20:54:27
    • Score: 5 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    i like the choice lance made, but a watch, wutever ne ways its realy good so far, the sespence is carzy
    • 02/06/2004
    • 19:46:00
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    its is really good, it seem real and also i think it is very well written, u did a good job
    • 02/06/2004
    • 19:29:06
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    this is really really outstanding, it is very detailed and it was really kool
    • 02/06/2004
    • 19:25:25
    • Score: 16 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice review

    i really like ur reveiw b4 i wasnt interseted in watching thew movie but now there is a chance that i would like to see it good job.
    • 01/06/2004
    • 19:22:48
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    this is very good
    • 31/05/2004
    • 18:39:18
    • Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    i think this was very interesnting to read i like how u used secondary inform. very good
    • 30/05/2004
    • 13:09:35
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Love and basketball

    ur essay is very interesting i like wut u said about the rules and i think u did a great job.
    • 29/05/2004
    • 17:40:39
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Animal farm

    i have read this book and i must say that this essay is very well written. u did a good job
    • 29/05/2004
    • 17:36:21
    • Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    i really like how u wrote ur essay it makes a lot of sense
    • 29/05/2004
    • 17:33:13
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    ur essay is extremly interseting i kept picturing all the groups at my school and this seems true wut u r saying, and i must say ur essay is really great i never noticed we teens did that before!
    • 28/05/2004
    • 19:34:27
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    i really like how ur essay is written its really well formated and i think u did a great job ur rite down to the point and wut u say makes sense
    • 28/05/2004
    • 19:17:18
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.