Well presented and accurate, though lacking in details. Overall a decent job.
- 03/06/2004
- 22:38:51
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
well i've finally found the first one. still i can't see what diamondize1 sees in this or any other person.
- 03/06/2004
- 02:52:59
- Score: 7 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
Ok it's the writing is bad enough, but you post them twice both part 7 and 8 and... I STILL can't find the first. This isn't meant to discourage your writing but this has no place on the website. I applaud your effort, you've done more than a lot of ppl would, but before you post something the next time have someone review it.
- 03/06/2004
- 02:49:32
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Regardless of whether your in 7th grade, the book(which i'm assuming it is) is terrible. There's so many different elements missing. To top that all off i can't even find the first part of it.
- 03/06/2004
- 02:44:08
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
needs works cited page
- 03/06/2004
- 01:36:25
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I understand what your saying and agree, yet the way you present your essay is much to conversational. I'm not sure where you're trying to lead to either.
- 03/06/2004
- 00:49:16
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
To say that arnold has no political experience is plain wrong. arnold has been invovled in california's school system advocating propositions for at least 4 years. It seems that this essay was written more on opinion than facts.
- 03/06/2004
- 00:46:00
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It was ok. You shouldn't or you should try to avoid using the word probably. It's asking for you to analyze the historical accuracy not your opinion.
- 31/05/2004
- 23:08:30
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.