Where do you go to school???
- 30/07/2004
- 20:36:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think this shows a really good understanding of the book. I too felt touched. thanks for the help
- 07/06/2004
- 15:47:30
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
could give more examples of research. And Grammar needs to be checked.
- 07/06/2004
- 15:09:34
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I thought that this was really well done, structured and full of great information. I hadn't read the book, but after reading this feel I should. I could see that you really took the time and actively read the material.
- 06/06/2004
- 16:13:11
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
poor grammar and structure, but decent content
- 06/06/2004
- 16:08:01
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Reminds me of those thought our religious e-mail or cards you might get. Nice.
- 06/06/2004
- 16:04:14
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I would have to say middle school writing. Not done well and has no supporting thesis. Great plot, but a lot of grammatical errors.
- 06/06/2004
- 16:02:01
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
In an essay or book report like this, it is good to be more detailed. If you make a statement, show by example where in the text gives you the idea for that statement. You must always back up your work and your ideas.
- 06/06/2004
- 16:00:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.