It sounds nice. With more of an introduction and closing paragraph it could be great. I would imagine that was not required for your essay.
- 14/06/2004
- 18:21:21
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is one of those essays that will appeal to anyone with a heart for you have captured emotion in such a way.
- 14/06/2004
- 04:51:35
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Your essay made me think.I have come to realize we live in a sex centric world. In a way such magazines can be partly blamed for they sell sex on every other page. Times were very different only a few thousand years ago. Somehow I would imagine Jesus and his follows did not subscribe to FHM.
- 14/06/2004
- 04:44:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay is rather informative. It answers some of those questions we have all wondered in the back of our minds but never thought to ask.
- 14/06/2004
- 04:35:03
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You were moddest with your choice of words, but the sound is knowledgeable. The length is not too shabby.
- 14/06/2004
- 04:32:06
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I would imagine that in order to write such a piece it would take personal experince with the matter. It's brave of you to press such frank words. I honor the fact that you don't glorify abortion. Thanks.
- 14/06/2004
- 04:28:19
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Your essay has an edge to it. Nice choice of words.
- 14/06/2004
- 04:23:26
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I found your essay to be very fact centric, which is great. It's good to hear the truth instead of biased propaganda.
- 14/06/2004
- 04:20:04
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Great work! Although, a tad on the short side you get your point across.
- 14/06/2004
- 04:17:52
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Short, sweet, and to the point. I wish the essay would have been longer, but it makes for good reference.
- 14/06/2004
- 04:14:18
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your essay is of wonderful quality. You have provided a great example. Thanks for sharing this with us!
- 14/06/2004
- 04:11:50
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It took me a moment to catch on but I got it. Keep up the good work.
- 14/06/2004
- 03:53:24
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.