Oh dear, they actually accepted this? And by the way thanks to whoever read one of my comments, didn't like it and went on to negitively rate every single comment I've ever made, I really appreciate the thought
- 23/10/2004
- 06:13:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Personally, I don't see what benefit could be gained by reading only the outline of your speech. Perhaps it would be more appropriate to post the entire thing.
- 04/10/2004
- 09:07:06
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This website is for serious submissions of real essays or actual pieces of creative writing. If you are serious about wanting to post your diary online then I reccomend that you create a blog or something similar. I would also reccomend that if you really want people to read it then you at least use proper spelling, grammar and sentence structure. But it's just a thought...
- 04/10/2004
- 09:00:33
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
your ideas are good but you need to spend more time working on a proper structure for you argument and finding some facts to back it up with.
- 30/09/2004
- 00:47:40
- Score: 0 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
An excellent essay. I admire your courage in submitting such a personal story, hopefully it will help people to understand some of the issues involved in such situations. Although I found some of the detail quite triggering, I appreciate the opportunity to read your story.
- 01/08/2004
- 06:16:25
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I really enjoyed reading this essay. It reads well and has an excellent structure. It raises valid, thought-provoking points. Well done!
- 28/07/2004
- 08:11:26
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Excellent treatment of a very distressing topic. Would have liked to hear more detail in the personal thoughts. Very well written
- 27/07/2004
- 08:26:14
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.