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  • Excellent . .

    I found this very useful for my experiment which i did yesterday . . thanks.
    • 18/08/2005
    • 08:57:50
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • I like it

    having read the book b4 i feel u know wat ur talking about but try to talk more about the racial perspective and the title itself
    • 05/08/2004
    • 00:16:00
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • A gr8 piece

    i studied macbeth 4 many years, im actually wtitting a thesis on it, and ur input has proven very valuable, well done thate deserves a smiley:) 10/10
    • 04/08/2004
    • 19:28:53
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Gr8

    nice intro and conclusion, lack in body, however very effective..
    • 04/08/2004
    • 19:22:17
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    a really informative essay... you back up your points with good examples and analysis. what you could do, though, is using more transition words (eg. moreover, indeed, contrasting....) to make your paper flow a little more...sound more like a speech
    • 04/08/2004
    • 19:21:01
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    like it, although i feel its a bit short and could have been expanded, try usein more topic sentences...
    • 04/08/2004
    • 06:36:14
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very factual

    factual peoce of witting, however personal references such as "i" deter the reader, and hence puts down the eassy...
    • 04/08/2004
    • 06:32:53
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Bravo

    a very eliquent essay is b4 my eyes, i feel that ur heat and soul were thrown it to this, u delved into the essay with such grace, we can all learn from ur writting technique, very well done, bravo
    • 04/08/2004
    • 06:17:39
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Global

    Ive read your essay once, and it was enough to make me believe you essay is nothing but an 4 year olds scrible. i dont know how you got this essay into this site but do the world a favour, take it off. and finally, stop writing filth. u infidel...nah nah im only playin, i think it was well written, but short...(got ya scared 4 a sec there)
    • 03/08/2004
    • 05:01:50
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good stuff

    i love ur use of quotes, and ur depth into the subject, however, ur sources bein form the internet isnt great as the internet isnt that reliable...good work
    • 03/08/2004
    • 04:58:11
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Wrong information

    i dont know what was ur source of information, but this is totally wrong, i just finished writting my thesis on hitler, and this is just babble!!!plz refer to ur sources and make sure there reliable
    • 03/08/2004
    • 02:15:43
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • I like it

    i think u got ur information across pretty clearly, keep it up
    • 03/08/2004
    • 02:12:19
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well written

    the use of topic sentences was gr8, and the argument was strong, however, there was minor use of narative language.
    • 02/08/2004
    • 06:51:50
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I disagree

    to be honest i found it rather offensive, and very partial, i feel that like it goes aroung in circle and its not really going anywhere, being a drama expert, i find that the script would be hard to follow at time, and it would be difficult for it to be put into motion.plz excuse my harsh comments, they speak the truth.
    • 02/08/2004
    • 06:46:28
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    that touched me in places i neva even knew existed...
    • 27/07/2004
    • 07:34:26
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • I Apoloise

    i feel that this essay was rushed, and if more time was taken it may have been more elequently executed...
    • 27/07/2004
    • 07:25:47
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Disgraceful

    this is absolute garbage, were u writting this whilst in a micro sleep, ur conclusion is 2 lines long, this discusts me, ur lack of inteligents ofends me, i have high expectations of this site and u disappoint the high standard that has been set by others...
    • 27/07/2004
    • 07:17:06
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Outrageous

    Ive read your essay once, and it was enough to make me believe you essay is nothing but an 4 year olds scrible. i dont know how you got this essay into this site but do the world a favour, take it off. and finally, stop writing filth. u infidel. half of this is jeberish, it just talks about nothing, plz refrain from writting essays it makes me sick!!!
    • 27/07/2004
    • 07:13:15
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good stuff

    i like the body, and the conclusion, but the introduction seems shifty, the way i was taught here where i live, i dont know where ur from, but here were not allowed to say things like, "today i goin to talks about..." stuff like that because its to in formal... u know wat i mean, but other than that, its a very good piece of work..
    • 22/07/2004
    • 01:00:18
    • Score: 36 out of 63 people found this comment useful.
  • Great work

    i think this is well written, and thought through, strong language techniques, overall top stuff...good job
    • 22/07/2004
    • 00:23:49
    • Score: 35 out of 40 people found this comment useful.
  • Hitler

    why is it repeated three times???
    • 28/06/2004
    • 23:53:09
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hitler

    interesting piece of work, but it lacks quantity
    • 28/06/2004
    • 23:40:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Hitler

    this very well written, very detialed nd thourogh. well done!
    • 28/06/2004
    • 23:13:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hitler

    this is a great piece of work, very detailed and thourogh...
    • 28/06/2004
    • 23:10:28
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good stuff

    i think its well written but it could be longer...
    • 28/06/2004
    • 07:05:18
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Too personal "i think"

    i like it but i think its too personal, i feel it should be more formal
    • 28/06/2004
    • 07:03:15
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Hamlet and Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead "How has the composer of the contemporary text used the earlier text to say something new?"

    i like the detail, its very thourogh
    • 28/06/2004
    • 06:59:01
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.