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  • Huh?

    whats this? how is this related to computers?
    • 08/11/2004
    • 12:36:49
    • Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Say what?

    Your title says that it's about lord of the rings, but the essay is actually about abortion. It's still a good essay; it explains both sides of the issue.
    • 29/10/2004
    • 10:57:14
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Phases?

    Clear notes that explain differences between the two divisions. To improve the notes, you might want to add the phases of mitosis and meiosis.
    • 08/10/2004
    • 17:03:06
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    vivid details and great diction
    • 18/09/2004
    • 20:33:22
    • Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Anti bush

    Even though I don't support Bush, I must say your essay is wrong. To repeat what cecile said, it's Hussein and anti-American extremists who murdered innocent people.
    • 18/09/2004
    • 17:54:10
    • Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Final fantasy

    the opening sentence is somewhat unclear. Additionally i advise you to make your grammer less discriminant, furthermore, this essay does not capture the true brilliance of the game. bye
    • 09/08/2004
    • 22:14:00
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Heavens Above

    a funny way to show the "business" of heaven
    • 01/08/2004
    • 10:25:09
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Not me

    The statement was not written by me, but by my brother. That dick is so annoying.
    • 24/07/2004
    • 20:27:07
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Omg

    oh my god! i thought this essay would suck! i myelf thought it was down right horrible! to my surprise , it actually has good scores!
    • 24/07/2004
    • 20:27:05
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Needs work

    Very limited. Sounds like this report came from a back of a book. Poor vocabulary and transition. "but he also had help from friends and someone he bribed." Bribed is not a good word here. The first couple of sentences in the conclusion are irrelevant. Overall, it needs a lot of work.
    • 24/07/2004
    • 20:11:14
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    You have one of the best analysis I know. The transition is smooth and the essay is thorough. Very nice.
    • 20/07/2004
    • 19:00:50
    • Score: 33 out of 38 people found this comment useful.
  • Good work

    I like how you analyze the meaning of each stanza with detail. Good introduction about villanelle.
    • 20/07/2004
    • 15:57:42
    • Score: 29 out of 39 people found this comment useful.
  • Last duchess

    Very nice introduction and conclusion. Plenty of quotes to support your argument. Nice job
    • 20/07/2004
    • 12:37:20
    • Score: 51 out of 57 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Your essay is pretty good. There's adequate evidence in the rabbit's uselessness.
    • 18/07/2004
    • 18:44:35
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • ???

    I dont think this qualifies as an essay, as it is a short story. An essay is a piece of writing on one subject, usually showing the writer's opinion. Again, I dont think this is an essay. But the story is still pretty good
    • 18/07/2004
    • 17:15:16
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.