whats this? how is this related to computers?
- 08/11/2004
- 12:36:49
- Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
Your title says that it's about lord of the rings, but the essay is actually about abortion. It's still a good essay; it explains both sides of the issue.
- 29/10/2004
- 10:57:14
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Clear notes that explain differences between the two divisions. To improve the notes, you might want to add the phases of mitosis and meiosis.
- 08/10/2004
- 17:03:06
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
vivid details and great diction
- 18/09/2004
- 20:33:22
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Even though I don't support Bush, I must say your essay is wrong. To repeat what cecile said, it's Hussein and anti-American extremists who murdered innocent people.
- 18/09/2004
- 17:54:10
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
the opening sentence is somewhat unclear. Additionally i advise you to make your grammer less discriminant, furthermore, this essay does not capture the true brilliance of the game. bye
- 09/08/2004
- 22:14:00
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
a funny way to show the "business" of heaven
- 01/08/2004
- 10:25:09
- Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
The statement was not written by me, but by my brother. That dick is so annoying.
- 24/07/2004
- 20:27:07
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
oh my god! i thought this essay would suck! i myelf thought it was down right horrible! to my surprise , it actually has good scores!
- 24/07/2004
- 20:27:05
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very limited. Sounds like this report came from a back of a book. Poor vocabulary and transition. "but he also had help from friends and someone he bribed." Bribed is not a good word here. The first couple of sentences in the conclusion are irrelevant. Overall, it needs a lot of work.
- 24/07/2004
- 20:11:14
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You have one of the best analysis I know. The transition is smooth and the essay is thorough. Very nice.
- 20/07/2004
- 19:00:50
- Score: 33 out of 38 people found this comment useful.
I like how you analyze the meaning of each stanza with detail. Good introduction about villanelle.
- 20/07/2004
- 15:57:42
- Score: 29 out of 39 people found this comment useful.
Very nice introduction and conclusion. Plenty of quotes to support your argument. Nice job
- 20/07/2004
- 12:37:20
- Score: 51 out of 57 people found this comment useful.
Your essay is pretty good. There's adequate evidence in the rabbit's uselessness.
- 18/07/2004
- 18:44:35
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I dont think this qualifies as an essay, as it is a short story. An essay is a piece of writing on one subject, usually showing the writer's opinion. Again, I dont think this is an essay. But the story is still pretty good
- 18/07/2004
- 17:15:16
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.