User Details For: melissah
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Body Image
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Self-Injury- There is an alternative
- 2240 words (9 pages)
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HUmm..
Your main contention has come across well, yet lacking in grammar and the structure of your paragraphs draws you down. Your own opinion throughout the topic seems somewhat erroneous in this sort of essay, it seems to be an issue piece, not an own opinion. Although, I do not know if your issue was based on your opinion or not.- 28/08/2004
- 21:30:50
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Great Job
It was an Excellent piece, very informative.- 31/07/2004
- 23:55:06
- Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.