Quite an interesting topic and since I don't have a considerate amount of knowledge on the subject matter I can't really give points on how to improve content matter.I can say however that this was well written and you put forward your standpoint very well.
- 08/09/2004
- 21:32:31
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You fail to give examples to support your argument. Do not assume that your audience is well-informed of your subject matter. Take the time to write a short background in your introduction - then bring forward your points of argument.You failed to mention that he stepped on the toes of people with much respect in Athens and that is a major contributing factor to his demise.However for a short speech or a summary this is useful.
- 08/09/2004
- 18:45:34
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This was a very well written essay although just a tad short for my liking. This could also be linked to modern day representations of truth through the media. e.g. the reputation of the media networks and our unquestioning attitudes towards the truths that they put forward.This was very interesting and made me want to look further into these ideas. Good work!
- 08/09/2004
- 18:31:11
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This is a movie review and when studied in depth brings many interesting topics to light. You make no mention of themes/underlying messages.I suggest you choose your title more wisely next time.
- 03/08/2004
- 04:26:54
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You do fail to mention many different aspects about the contexts of BR and BNW.. For instance globalisation, intergrated eastern/western culture, the dominance of corporations..For BNW you could have mentioned the loosening of morals within society at that time.. For instance women were starting to smoke and drink in public..Also people were searching for the perfect goverment regime to form a utopian society, Huxley was also commenting on this with the "World State" - showing the flaws of such ideas with an exaggerated example.And I believe if you wanted to narrow the genres down it would be dystopic science fiction.That's it!
- 03/08/2004
- 03:48:53
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all my comment are belong to you! hahaVery lengthy but a solid summary of the plot..
- 03/08/2004
- 03:40:39
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You might have forgotten the mention that in Blade Runner that (artificial) animals are material signs of wealth e.g. The owl @ the Tyrell Corp..
- 03/08/2004
- 03:35:00
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