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  • What about other religions

    The title of this essay made is seem like you would be comparing Greek mythology to other world religions instead it about your personal scientific views vs Greek mythology. What about Hinduism or Chrisitianty?
    • 23/04/2005
    • 07:24:21
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    After reading your explanton of the symbols I am inclend to actually read the book. Do you recomend it.
    • 06/04/2005
    • 19:57:41
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Better Luck nice time

    I liked your essay I feel that one dating you should never focus on yourslef and always compliment your date. Next time I suggest giving your date flowers and finding out what she likes.
    • 06/04/2005
    • 19:38:36
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Add more

    I suggest reshearhing how arangment of rooms leads to inner balance and how this room is an example of it.
    • 02/04/2005
    • 20:31:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • I don.t think there going to accept this

    The people who run this site wont accept this unles you turn into an essay on the effects of Fable on people minds or somethung like that.
    • 02/04/2005
    • 18:41:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not very informative

    This essay had a few grammer issues and could have been more in depth.If you want this accepted develop it more.
    • 28/03/2005
    • 23:19:17
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok,but can you add more terms

    This is a good start but I would of like it if you had given more examples of Free Trade Areas.
    • 25/03/2005
    • 10:14:23
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good esay

    This made me think aboout renwable enry sources and PEF sounds like a promising one. I myslef feel corn oil is better, but PEF can still be used as a supplement.
    • 20/03/2005
    • 12:41:14
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Informative

    Alot of information but I would of liked many paragraphs instead of one big one. After a while o f reading it is hard to keep track about what aspect of the war you are talking about.
    • 20/03/2005
    • 12:26:34
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good article but,

    You make good points about how Eminem's rap music affects people but I feelyou can't only focus on neagative music like his. Event though most of rap music promotes vileonce you can blame it fot the problmes of the youth. I feel ganstar rap music is just a contributing factor to our vielonet society. You could mak the same case for GTA 1-3, Movies, and tv shows. Also some people are naturally angrier than others and more succeptible to vileont images. I know you yourslef have been exposed to vileont images, but you probaly don't go around attacking people. Overall good esssay butjust take a look at the ohter side.
    • 17/03/2005
    • 16:12:54
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • I feel thie is a really good start

    This would be a good start to an essay on meterosexuality vs homesexuality and "macho" men. I feel you could make some intersting points.
    • 16/03/2005
    • 17:00:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Informative

    This is a well wriiten essay it made me think of eating better even though I don't have Diabetes. I liked how you included your sources and had the indepth paragraph about the elven year old child.
    • 16/03/2005
    • 15:53:58
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • You plan sounds good but could contain many flaws.

    I find this plan generally okay but I have a few questions. Who is in charge when you die? Could you succesor just forget your rules and create a dictorship?Is it really fair to tax the rich for 20 years? I wonder how much 50 percent just to cover the cost of the middle class and poor. Also your view on outsourcing, outsourcing can be good because it makes products cheaper for the poor class. It only hurts when the economy doesn't create enough new higher paying technology jobs to sastsfy the displaced workers. Also if your taxing the rich for the first twenty years what incetive do they have to invest in the economy. Your ghoverment would have to rely on the middle class to support thus creating a service industry economy. Your Goverment seems good in prinicpal but just like communism it could turn out horribly wrong.
    • 14/03/2005
    • 20:27:17
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Goob but

    Dont strat a sentance with but and don't say in conclusion. It is better to write in such a way that a readear knows you areabout to finish.
    • 31/10/2004
    • 05:06:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • This essay was good comparsion

    You did a good job of comparing the people you mentioned, but you could ofused better transitons to have a betterflow to the essay.
    • 31/10/2004
    • 04:58:16
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Skimp essay

    very short essay needs more anylasis of diction
    • 23/10/2004
    • 21:08:08
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • What is it about

    What excatly are you trying to say about human kind.
    • 10/08/2004
    • 17:04:48
    • Score: 8 out of 17 people found this comment useful.