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    I loved the way the rhythm of death, despair, and darkness emphasized the darkness to darkness cycle of life. I think you did a great job with the harsh \'d\' sounds because it gave off the feeling that there is no escape from the whole process! However, I didn\'t quite follow when you mentioned that we came from darkness, yet death is the beginning. Also, by writing that death should not be feared, as it results in despair, but despair is part of the cycle, are you trying to convey that it is human nature\'s inability to overcome whatever follow that disables them from doing what they should that causes their suffering? Or maybe I should just get more sleep and read it again later!
    • 17/08/2004
    • 11:10:39
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.