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  • Um...Okay

    Your official stance on the topic was? This looks like it might was supposed to be a concession essay gone bad. Addressing both sides of a topic is important, but you need to stick to one point and not jump around so much. Re-organize this, and you have an excellent paper.
    • 23/02/2005
    • 21:33:33
    • Score: 4 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • 4 points of consideration

    1] well written2]not so well researched/cited (use MLA)3]intresting4]relevantQuestion: Did you really make a 100% on this or are you polishing a little on that? I find it a little hard to believe that any profesor would be quite so lenient with the poor works cited.
    • 23/02/2005
    • 21:23:41
    • Score: 0 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Are you serious?

    I just took phyc. last semester and I've never heard of any of this stuff before. My dual participation professor is pretty up to date...
    • 15/02/2005
    • 19:35:20
    • Score: 1 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow...

    You are in the same grade I am and I don't think I could ever write something like this... Congratulations on a well writen piece of work.
    • 27/01/2005
    • 15:12:23
    • Score: 0 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Topic?

    You strayed from your topic in several places. The flow is nonexistant and the whole idea of what your trying to say is very jumbled. You have a good point, and a good idea on an important topic. You just need to develop your paper more.
    • 27/01/2005
    • 14:57:56
    • Score: 2 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Awesome

    Great report. i have a copy of this book and read it, well sections of it, regularly. Environmantalism IS a big deal, but sometimes things just get out of hand.
    • 15/01/2005
    • 15:10:27
    • Score: 0 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Political Question

    Why is everyone on this site suck up to the higher ranking users?
    • 13/01/2005
    • 14:32:01
    • Score: 19 out of 65 people found this comment useful.
  • Total agreement

    I completely agree.
    • 11/01/2005
    • 15:39:54
    • Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Very, very nice, but...

    Isn't your closing statement kinda risky?
    • 10/01/2005
    • 16:17:33
    • Score: 1 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Useful

    Useful, but do you happen to have anything on antithesis in this play? If you do, I'll make a deal with you before the 27th for a copy of it.
    • 10/01/2005
    • 16:15:25
    • Score: 0 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Political question

    Why is everyone on this site suck up to the higher ranking users?
    • 10/01/2005
    • 16:04:30
    • Score: 17 out of 57 people found this comment useful.
  • +

    teachers like that stuff, get an even better grade
    • 27/12/2004
    • 11:01:02
    • Score: 3 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • I read it : I liked it

    Shakespeare is one of history's best play writes and you did a really nice job analyzing his rhetoric. (HINT:You could try saying a little more on the linguistics of it next time ;)overall wonderful
    • 27/12/2004
    • 10:59:21
    • Score: 2 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Useful even without being complete

    Sometimes every little bit can help.
    • 15/12/2004
    • 16:20:22
    • Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Wonderful

    Essay acurately portrays the spooky and erie points in the book. reality doesn't exist in the book though the book can be disturbing in comparison to our reality
    • 15/12/2004
    • 16:05:16
    • Score: 2 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Good, though Short

    Very good job. Lots of details left out though. I never liked chemistry...
    • 15/12/2004
    • 15:58:52
    • Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Ever heard of a thesaurus?

    "shit" is really not a good word to use in an essay. There is a thesaurus on this site you know. "Shit" actually hassome interesting synonyms.
    • 15/12/2004
    • 15:48:05
    • Score: 2 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Cool.

    Kinda short and broad topics, but a good summary/general overview of the topic.
    • 15/12/2004
    • 15:43:09
    • Score: 0 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks. I can really use these ideas

    You ever had to prepare for an in depth class discusion on a topic like this in one night? these sorts of things can be very useful.
    • 13/12/2004
    • 16:38:44
    • Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Grammar

    Try rereading your essay, it's a little misworded in places but other than that you did a good job. :-)
    • 01/12/2004
    • 14:58:50
    • Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Dictionary needed

    Too many medical terms with more than 7 syllables. You could maybe include somewhere the meaning of these words? footnotes,ect...?
    • 26/11/2004
    • 11:49:44
    • Score: 4 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Good analysis

    You analized the fact well, but couldn't you have been a little more specific about what the actual text of the terms were? I've never actually read a copy of the document myself, only what other people have written and documentaries, your points would be clearer if you included the basis from which they come.
    • 26/11/2004
    • 11:21:51
    • Score: 2 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow, farfetched

    This is really cool, I've never read anything quite like this before. this is neat, and well written. :-)
    • 26/11/2004
    • 11:10:15
    • Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow this is really good

    I like this, very inteting, lots of good info!
    • 22/11/2004
    • 05:50:17
    • Score: 1 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Is that it?

    Wow
    • 22/11/2004
    • 05:47:22
    • Score: 0 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good numbers

    You need at least 2 more citations for a paper like this. You did a really good job on this though :-)
    • 22/11/2004
    • 05:44:56
    • Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Intresting subject

    I ussualy try to follow the latest newa on endangered species, but i hadn't heard of this yet. Your paper is really repetitve and wordy, try working on that and your grades will getv even better.
    • 20/11/2004
    • 18:51:34
    • Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Fun book to read

    I like this and most of Orwell's other stories/novels. You did a very nice job with this one. :)
    • 11/11/2004
    • 17:07:11
    • Score: 4 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Nice

    Essays are supposed to have a little bit of attitude worked in. This is very precise and to the point. Good job.
    • 11/11/2004
    • 16:59:50
    • Score: 8 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
  • Intresting&complex

    If someone doesn't already have a clue about your topic they're not gonna get any of this, but it is very well written and is a commendable piece of work.
    • 04/11/2004
    • 18:16:07
    • Score: 1 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative

    Being as I have some N.A. heritage (Comanche) I can appreciate what is being said here. But, don't you think you could have narrowed down the topic a lttle more? that is a very large point you're addressing.Don't get me wrong, you did a really good job,but try being a liite more specific.
    • 04/11/2004
    • 18:12:12
    • Score: 5 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Commended

    I have had to read this book before. Anyone who has the patence to analyze the context in this much detail is amazing.
    • 04/11/2004
    • 18:05:16
    • Score: 2 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good

    I really like this particular essay becayse the author mostly refrained from making judgemental comments about the teenagers. I have known people who have been through the exact situation described above, she's in the suicide statistics.
    • 31/10/2004
    • 09:22:07
    • Score: 2 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Tut, tut

    Whatch your language and give more sensory details
    • 28/10/2004
    • 17:46:21
    • Score: 2 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    I don't know whether to call this brilliant or demented. I did notice a few grammer mistakes though. Try proofreading a little more or get someone else to. Lots of little words are gone.
    • 28/10/2004
    • 17:41:53
    • Score: 2 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Overall= greatBUT= a little to mush repitition in the beggining you think? Its like one of those "in the beggining, when we began..." type of things
    • 28/10/2004
    • 17:31:12
    • Score: 34 out of 68 people found this comment useful.
  • Try this

    MORE ANALYISIS INTSEAD OF SUMMARY! WAY BELOW EXPECTAIONS IN COMPARISON TO YOUR OTHER WORKS
    • 28/10/2004
    • 17:27:04
    • Score: 14 out of 43 people found this comment useful.
  • Needs development

    YOu have a lot of good points, but you need more examples and annalysis. Nice vocabulary though.
    • 27/10/2004
    • 14:57:00
    • Score: 2 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Neat Essay

    Very well written. really good poem too. one of my favorites, like Poe better though
    • 25/10/2004
    • 15:12:45
    • Score: 20 out of 30 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job, I like it.

    This is one of the best essays I've read on this subject in a long time. You have a works cited/bibliography for it? You should of had a higher grade... what'd you get docked for?
    • 25/10/2004
    • 14:59:40
    • Score: 2 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Idea

    I think your essay really needs a better title
    • 11/09/2004
    • 17:03:00
    • Score: 2 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Idea

    YOu hit all the right high points with this one, good job. The only thing I really would do to change it would be to compare & contrast a little, maybe add a couple of allusions to other Shakespeareanworks.
    • 07/09/2004
    • 20:51:31
    • Score: 3 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Idea

    Try using a little more allusion and not-so-blunt vocab. Also, for a paper on this topic and of this size should have at least 4 more refrences
    • 07/09/2004
    • 20:46:43
    • Score: 3 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Just a passing suggestion

    Proofread your stuff *before* posting it on the web. YOur ideas are really choppy and everything is unorganized. You have a really good focus but you did a really crappy job developing it.
    • 30/08/2004
    • 15:26:21
    • Score: 4 out of 14 people found this comment useful.