Many things wrong here! First, there are lots of scenes with the army in it, wat about that big scene were he talks to them all before they go out to war?secondly, you havent looked at the movie in great depth. This movie was made to show people how comersalized the war was, not on was it a guerrilla war and a media war. You have not done a very impressive essay, im afraid to say, and i have rated it poor.
- 06/03/2005
- 11:42:21
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I totaly agree! nicely done. Women in today's American society are no longer the helpless dependent creatures that men have treated in the past like property. this is only to true!! Well done!
- 28/09/2004
- 14:48:24
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
very intresting. Never ate a taco before, never even heard of one!!! lol... nice useful essay!
- 28/09/2004
- 14:46:00
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Nice... a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but apart from that, its touching and makes you feel sad... :-(
- 28/09/2004
- 14:43:34
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bit short. Not much sense in it really. try harder nest time.
- 28/09/2004
- 11:34:44
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you only need to subm,it this once
- 28/09/2004
- 10:32:56
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Nice poem. This kind of reflects a teenage life? anyways, nicely done and great effort
- 27/09/2004
- 10:23:41
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Nicely done. Thomas hardy is one of my favorite poets so thanks alot. Also, a small biblography to site yours sources would be nice to. Good job.
- 26/09/2004
- 11:23:12
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Nicely done. Although, it could have been a lot longer im sure. All the same, nicely done. Im sure if you had made it at least 500 words you could have added a biblography, but all the same nice effort.
- 26/09/2004
- 10:21:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This has become a widely selected topic. Film anazalises are ususally very intresting, as is yours. Well done.
- 26/09/2004
- 08:59:54
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
you only need to submit this once.
- 26/09/2004
- 08:53:28
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
good. I liked the way u talked us through the movie and how it affects u. Also, a few spelling mistakes and no biblography. But all the same nicely done and thanks for this essay, its helpful
- 25/09/2004
- 17:01:33
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Let me tell u, there are plenty of problums in Ireland. Maybe not like September the 11th or the KKK, but ireland has so many problums. Examples include the cold war(over now), deaths over secterian believes and murder. Yet, this is a good example of how ireland has suffered in the hands of terrorism. Nicely done and great biblography.
- 25/09/2004
- 16:55:03
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Im touched. I went on a school trip once and met these lovely skater/punk boys. The smallest one was my favorite. Then 3 weeks later we came back and i met up with them alot. A few months ago he commited suicide. This poem shows me how much he was feeling. How much pain he kept up inside him. Thanks... this has shown me so much and i dont take a day i spent with him for granted. Thanks.
- 25/09/2004
- 16:46:23
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
nice.... personally, i can see myself standing outside a alochol store! lol... any, very well written and yes a conclusional paragraph would have been nice.
- 25/09/2004
- 16:41:31
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Yea.... i like this. The movie isnt personally a favorite of mine, yet your analzation of the conflicts that occur throughtout Godfather are brilliant. Nicely done.P.s. conflict in movies are allways exciting!! well done
- 25/09/2004
- 09:01:56
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
http://web.uccs.edu/history/samples/musui.html
- 23/09/2004
- 15:50:10
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
nice work. This is a small but amuzing account, Thanks alot. Nicely though out, and not at all origonal. Good job!
- 23/09/2004
- 15:45:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Did you even read through this? It has so many spelling mistakes!! Yet, i see were you are coming from. Try making it longer, fixing the spelling mistakes and resubmit it. Im sure it will be accepted better by people.
- 23/09/2004
- 12:38:01
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Nicely done. This is a good example of how to make people see how serious this really is. Yet, please site your sourses. Nicely done!
- 23/09/2004
- 12:36:02
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i think its actully 'Stereotypes'. anyway, nice essay, unlike your other essay i rated this one isnt as personal as it could be, leaving it bland and floating with no prespective. I rated it good as it was, its just a it bland, dont take this the wrong way, it was brilliant. good job.
- 21/09/2004
- 11:55:56
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i dont understand the 'parents are not children' i dont understand the title. Yet, you have here a nice, justifed essay from a personal kind of view and makes an intresting read, so thanks for this!! =p
- 21/09/2004
- 11:51:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Nicely done!!! Nice=, clear and consise! well done. good to read and very helpful, thanks!
- 21/09/2004
- 11:49:46
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Such a detailed and touching account. Makes me want to reach out and hug u... werever you are! Nicely done, very touching and as Tsmomca said, be proud of who you are... *sob*
- 19/09/2004
- 16:37:54
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This is nice. It explains the thoughts and feelings that you felt that day im sure many years ago. The way you discribed the scenry almost makes me feel like i was standing beside you. Of course, disney land is a place of magic, and for such a short story... i am touched. glad you got home ok =p
- 19/09/2004
- 16:35:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Hum.... which one? Matrix one two or three? ehhehe... doesnt matter. Anyway, nicely put. You have considered the possablity of the movie relating to real life and analzed the movies impact well. Also the start paragraph shows that you have done your research. A biblography would have been nice, but.... nice job!
- 19/09/2004
- 16:30:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
nicely done. I KNOW we have had disagreements about each others work, but this is brilliant, p.s. im sorry bout that, Nicely done and im readin the others story.................. now. bye
- 17/09/2004
- 17:38:02
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
good! nice work. Few spelling mistakes and a bit short, but all the same nicely done.
- 16/09/2004
- 15:39:33
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
too long and detailed. May i remind u this is a family website were children come, i dont think the admin's would be pleased.... anyway, nice paper. Maybe leave out a few details....
- 16/09/2004
- 12:08:25
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Bravo. This truely is a trade mark of you Phantom. This is a wonderful view of your time here, even though it is limited. If this is your last piece then i urge others to read it, you wont be forgotten here, neither will your plastic sword. Bye xox
- 15/09/2004
- 11:58:34
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.