Not bad but I agree you need more examples and possibly go into more detail.
- 01/01/2006
- 23:54:55
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To the point. Good for such a short length.
- 01/01/2006
- 23:50:37
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Very good and informative.
- 04/10/2005
- 21:31:35
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I think you were very lucky to live to the ripe old age of 80 when the average life span was 30-40. Good work though.
- 04/10/2005
- 21:18:24
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I don't think reality tv is going to be the downfall of American society.
- 04/10/2005
- 21:02:29
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Structure of the paper wasn't very good. Keep ideas together instead of restating similar ideas in seperate paragraphs.
- 04/10/2005
- 14:34:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Although I don't agree with the author, the paper was written well.
- 04/10/2005
- 14:25:58
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I agree with your essay, however you could have expanded on it by giving more specific facts instead of the general statements.
- 13/10/2004
- 09:19:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Easy to follow and very interesting. Keeps the attention of the reader.
- 13/10/2004
- 09:03:30
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.