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Did u understand this?
your essay is well thought out and has good information but you did not seem to have a heavy hold on verb tenses. also in an essay never say "I" the reader knows who you are talking about- 26/09/2004
- 20:04:14
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How sad
everybody feels a little dejected at times you seem very talented and you have a good artistic perspective on the pains and agonies of life. don't let them dominate you, okay?- 26/09/2004
- 19:49:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.