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  • Juvenile

    decent essay, but a tad juvenile. It seemed too childish to be of much use as a reference for other students.
    • 27/05/2002
    • 15:31:31
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • WOW

    VERY good analysis of both the book and the film! good reference!!! Full of unique interpretations and supporting detials.
    • 27/05/2002
    • 02:10:09
    • Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • References

    Good reference for students. A wonderful analysis of Hamlet. Everything seemed accurate and well thought-out, supported by logical thinking and details.
    • 27/05/2002
    • 02:06:20
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Clarity

    Good review, though I was abit confused in the beginning. When doing a review, you should NEVER assume that your audience has seen it or has any clue what you are talking about. It was very unclear that Ben was a black male and Barbara a white female. At first I thought the hidden message you were getting at was that women shouldn't work b/c I didn't know which one was black/white
    • 27/05/2002
    • 02:02:21
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Cloning

    good essay for 8th grade, but keep in mind it is 8th grade! it gives an interesting perspoective from a person of a younger generation, but wouldn't exactly be the best essay to use as a reference for a research paper!
    • 27/05/2002
    • 01:35:09
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Moderation

    The key to beer being better than milk is MODERATION...this essay was part of an entire project, but basically summed up a lot of the research. When taken in moderation, beer won't kill you...when taken in moderation, milk may still give you cancer or heart problems whihc may kill you...
    • 26/05/2002
    • 20:40:05
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Wonderful!

    very good, well researched paper! I'm a lesbian and I didn't even know that was a health issue! Very well presented, and I especially liked the rephrasing of potential questions asked to be less threatening. A very well earned 93%
    • 26/05/2002
    • 13:24:37
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    VERY good essay, especially for it's length! A lot of info in few words without seeming too cluttered. very good!
    • 25/05/2002
    • 15:22:16
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Abrupt

    good essay, though I thought the end was too abrupt. It was lacking a necessary conclusion that would sort of complete the essay. Otherwise, it was very good!
    • 25/05/2002
    • 15:19:33
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good!

    Very good essay and resource for others doing a report on the same or similar topic. YOu should try to avoid starting sentances with "and," but otherwise and excellent essay! very well researched and thought out.
    • 25/05/2002
    • 15:15:34
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Review of essay

    A few grammatical errors, especially in which types of punctuation to use (often periods where there should be question marks). Good for a 10th grade essay, good resource for others looking for a way to get started on their own!
    • 22/05/2002
    • 16:40:12
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.