great work again from dalbir
- 26/01/2005
- 12:08:24
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I found this intresting and im usisng this andf appling my coursework and my teacher says lookin to a for as biology not jus this one but all of this guys he nos wot he is doin
- 26/01/2005
- 12:06:38
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is very good and interesting and lots of information. My verdict-very good.
- 10/11/2004
- 10:44:17
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This essay or so called project appears to be confusing, you should of done it separatly. My verdict-not really good for someone at 11th grade.
- 09/11/2004
- 11:48:17
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Its good but not good enough-too short and lack of detail.
- 30/10/2004
- 03:49:46
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A interesting essay on death penalties, opinion expressed nicely, balanced arguement on why death penalty is good and why it is bad.
- 28/10/2004
- 09:55:19
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is too short, more action and add a bit more tension needed however its quite good.
- 27/10/2004
- 12:59:51
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I think this essay does't talk about the actual events that led to World War 2.It only talks about America and its involvement.
- 16/10/2004
- 12:36:30
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I agree with your essay about how Bush went to war with Iraq on false information and how his campaign appears to have made the decision to brazen it out by portraying Bush as a successful war president despite the growing misgivings about his leadership, and on the war in Iraq.
- 12/10/2004
- 09:53:59
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Really good also very true(Most of it to me anyway)Great style of writing and a nice balanced essay.
- 09/10/2004
- 11:57:31
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
There are some mistakes in your essay otterwise it is quite good. One mistake is 'their hands flying every which way as they speak' also some of your wording isn't good.
- 09/10/2004
- 11:47:55
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I am studying English literature at school(As Level) and think that your essay is quite good and shows good depth. SR(MY INTIALS if your wondering)
- 07/10/2004
- 13:05:24
- Score: 38 out of 46 people found this comment useful.