i like what you said. doesn't seem like you know a lot of facts about this issue, but your point view is direct.
- 31/12/2004
- 15:08:02
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i like this because it gives the reader a full view of the history of north korea. this stuff is also really hard to find on the internet.thanks
- 31/12/2004
- 14:59:51
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i think macbeth did seize control of himself as the play progessed, slowly becoming a tyrant. on the otherhand, lady macbeth lost her control as the play progressed. I think this is an important issue. we all kind of understand the changes early on that macbeth went through, which was your topic for the essay.anyways, its a good indepth summary, but i think the topic should be somewhat more subjective than objective.
- 23/12/2004
- 22:41:23
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i dont really see a problem in our voter apathetic society today because the informed people make knowledgable votes. it is arguable that not the whole country is voting; however, those that dont vote arent voting because they dont want to. It really comes down to education because through education one learns the importance of voting and different things in life.i like your essay, but the flaws were overlooked quite quickly and there seem to be many flaws in compulsory voting. the only thing good about it is that everyone votes, sometimes even if they don't know anything.
- 14/11/2004
- 00:28:44
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clearly written. i think the electoral college should be taken away because it is a cause for voter apathy. also, it seems stupid that the college is called upon to elect the president when the difference in the popular vote already proves who should win. a general popular voting system would eliminate the EC for sure, but would not really represent the less populated states, but i dont care about them.
- 13/11/2004
- 23:23:20
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it raises a lot of points that i have never realized; that voter apathy isn't a prominent problem in society. thanks for your help.
- 13/11/2004
- 22:40:38
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the essay was pretty good, but you covered too many topics. i agree with helpdesk that the topic should have been, "the reasons behind a decline in voter turnout". possibly even narrow it down to why young people have the lowest voter turnout.
- 13/11/2004
- 21:33:29
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i really like the way you wrote the essay. it's well structured, edited, and explained with concrete references.
- 24/10/2004
- 00:30:20
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there should be less describing and more insight.youre paragraphs dont link that well and it doesnt seem much like an essay. Also, there are some mistakes here and there.however, i do like the part about the egg because i have never thought of that.
- 24/10/2004
- 00:20:43
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theres an essay that's totally like this one, i just read it a couple of days ago, but it was a bit different, i thinkgood examples and insight, points are clearly shown
- 23/10/2004
- 16:40:04
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it's unique because not many people write about paul dempsterhowever, more personal insight is needed but there are good examples
- 23/10/2004
- 16:29:51
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i dont think you can base the most important points in the book from the post-violence results. however most people consciously ignore the fact that violence played a big role because the book was so much more psychological than physical.
- 23/10/2004
- 16:24:50
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the way you write is solid and there are no glearing grammar mistakesgood examples are presentthe topic does not go deep into the novel, but it has been well written with concrete examples
- 23/10/2004
- 16:15:54
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this is great work. it has solid comprehension with quotes directly from the book to support it.i like it. finely edited with good meat in the essay.
- 21/10/2004
- 16:08:33
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youre essay was a bit loose here and there and a better conclusion would be goodthe grammatical errors make the essay wonkybut i like youre examples and thoughts
- 21/10/2004
- 16:02:22
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the use of commas caused what seemed like run-on sentences sometimes and it was a bit repetitivebut overall it a well structured point, with good examples
- 21/10/2004
- 15:56:19
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good examples and analogies/comparisoni agree with some of things that were saidi think the organization/wording is very unique, but im not a big fan of it
- 19/10/2004
- 22:52:06
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its pretty funny, grammatical errors though
- 16/10/2004
- 14:24:19
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.