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  • Problems with the layout

    The author shouldn't put too many spaces between two lines. Readers will feel that the essay is incoherent and difficult to understand it. The author should use some small lines to write about what the abservations stand for.
    • 18/10/2004
    • 22:27:40
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.

  • The essay doesn't express the same ideas

    The writer isn\'t stick to the topic.He must try to talk about the disadvantages of studying abroad than advantages to support the ideas he gives
    • 11/10/2004
    • 22:58:09
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.