Many points in your essay are totally wrong. Many were pulled from mid air, definately should have a lower mark.
- 04/04/2006
- 16:12:23
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I liked your essay but I would recommend next time to keep the "i"'s out of the essay, your personal opinion sometimes pushes the reader away.
- 25/01/2006
- 19:11:03
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was well written and your ideas and points were supported which shows a strong writter, although it was written well I do not support the essays ideas but would be given a high mark in any level of post secondary.
- 11/01/2006
- 21:18:19
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.