I only rated this with the halfway mark because it is lacking facts and a purpose. This is very short, and though it gives a taste of the view, there's no real "meat" to this.
- 04/12/2004
- 21:07:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well thought out, but short. You generalized quite a bit in your report, however, and you may want to rephrase some of your statements. Also, you could think about adding in some facts about date-rape in the gay community to add an overall outlook to the topic.
- 04/12/2004
- 21:02:46
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This was a little long and wordy, but overall a well thought out essay. The information was useful, and the facts fit together nicely.
- 04/12/2004
- 20:53:47
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.