My Physics teacher recommended that I shorten a number of the quotes included in my essay.I however had a number of requirements to meet, and so if you are not restricted by this as well; it would do your grade good to shorten or even reduce the number of quotes used in this essay.
- 30/11/2008
- 12:37:47
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While the content is good, using wikipedia as a reference is not always as good idea as many places will not accept it as a reference.
- 13/10/2008
- 16:47:05
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Very well thought out and follows a logical progression.
- 10/10/2006
- 20:20:51
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This really pulls aspects of the whole book together and you don't leave much out. You also make strong points, and convey your argument very well.
- 10/10/2006
- 20:19:41
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Great essay, you prove your point, and it isn't over drawn.
- 10/10/2006
- 20:18:23
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I feel you did a good job on this, you showed your position and did not change sides. Good work.
- 10/10/2006
- 20:01:52
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed this it was well writen and it sounds like you know what you're talking about. Also remeber that cheathouse does not support formating to remove those tab's.
- 06/09/2005
- 22:54:08
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A really good essay for this site. Anyways it was well writen and i did not see any typos or spelling error but i am no proof reader. Good work.On a side note Cheat house does not have formating so the tabs will turn into "<Tab/>" You should remove them on your next essay.
- 06/09/2005
- 22:51:43
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A little short but well written. You should expand more but i know that it is just an reaction to an essay.
- 06/09/2005
- 18:21:54
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Please remove all formatting. "&middot;<Tab/>" As cheathouse does not have any formating so you have to remove all bullets and tabs. Also I don't know how public your essay was to start with but you may want to leave peoples names out unless they consent to it.Over all it was a good read. I enjoyed it even if it is not really an essay.
- 06/09/2005
- 18:18:52
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A good essay, this might be your first submission but it does not accept tabs. I know its a pain but you should remove them on your next essay submission.
- 06/09/2005
- 18:15:28
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Thats not an essay its a paragraph. It should be longer. Its well writen but next time please try to label it as a paragraph.
- 18/11/2004
- 09:18:14
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"Very often a student when doing a research paper will 'accidently'forget to footnote his work. By 'forgetting' to give the author credit, thestudent has claimed the work as his own."Just so funny that its posted here.
- 17/11/2004
- 16:24:26
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It is a very well writen essay.
- 16/11/2004
- 17:55:16
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The title could have been more. What book are you talking about. Also you may want to get rid of the <Tab/>&lt for the tab's
- 16/11/2004
- 13:35:50
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Hello, Thank you for posting your comments. I shall try to improve.
- 16/11/2004
- 13:34:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Maybe you should try to submit a series of questions instead of just one. Not saying that you should not submit it, Just maybe bundleing them together would help.
- 16/11/2004
- 13:32:33
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Hey on your next Essay make sure to take out the \"<Tab/>&lt\" Dont worry i did it on my first Essay.
- 16/11/2004
- 13:25:29
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Hey people. Sorry about the "<Tab/>" This was my first essay submited and i made some errors.
- 16/11/2004
- 12:21:31
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.