\".0..unlike Hamlet (lines 49-56). Fortinbras is seen as a man who is willing to take risks, unlike Hamlet\"...is that correct english?What was the essay question? was it an essay? I was taught not to use personal pronouns in an essay.Also, what\'s with the \"<Tab/&gt\"?Sorry to be so critical, it is a helpful enough piece of work :)
- 07/12/2004
- 08:22:53
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that was very deatailed and well written. It helped me understand points that i missed. However, i think you forgot to write about one of Iago's major motivations for what he did to othello; his beleif that othello slept with emilia."twixt mine sheets he hath done mine office". I was reading through the section which should have it, and i don'tt think saw it. apart from that, great job
- 07/12/2004
- 08:16:54
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There is alot of great info in here. One small suggestion, perhaps you could have included a reference section for where you got your info?
- 07/12/2004
- 08:00:37
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this is easy to understand yet displays great deatail. I loved the reference section as well, very useful.
- 07/12/2004
- 07:57:57
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thanks, this was very informative. You displayed a great deal of knowledge
- 07/12/2004
- 07:56:21
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It's a well structured essay, but perhaps the vocab could be improved? I'm just wondering if you could have perhaps used a better word than 'grownup's, for example.
- 07/12/2004
- 03:25:55
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Sorry if this comment is out of place, but i've always been taught not to include personal pronouns in an essay, and you use 'we' a number of times.Not critisizing you, but just in case you're weren't supposed to make it personal for the audience, i thought i'd let you know.
- 18/11/2004
- 20:30:35
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