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  • Not an essay!

    This is not an essay. Thats all I have to say. I don't think this should be accepted.
    • 12/12/2004
    • 08:46:19
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Lovely

    A lovely piece of work, keep writing, it was a great read and I loved it.Only advice would be to think about the form and metre, its a very unusual structure.Other than that - great!
    • 09/12/2004
    • 12:10:11
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Great

    This is a great essay, you have obviously researched this really well, it is highly informative and an extremely interesting read. I'm not sure about the idea that masochists have to be cured though...unless in very extreme cases where the pain is at a dangerous level. I'm not into the pain of masochism, but I love being tied up and blindfolded and I certainly have masochist fantasises. I don't think theres anything wrong with it if it's not hurting anyone.
    • 08/12/2004
    • 15:29:04
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Nice essay, although you might have backed it up with references. My only suggestion would be to add in some examples of Bush's apparent stupidity. "Bushisms" as they are tagged now. I find the pictures of Bush reading books upside down, calling Greek people Greecians and not knowing who the President of Pakistan is, when asked on international television, far, FAR more frightening than any drink-driving convictions. And as for his "Christianity", I mean come on - how many innocent people has he murdered in the last year?
    • 08/12/2004
    • 15:08:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Brilliant

    This is great...usually every essay on this site is anti-homosexual. Well done - this essay was really informative and will perhaps prompt other people to revise their beliefs. You say that since the beginning of time unification has been between a man and a woman. Well, also since the beginning of time there have been relationships between men and men and women and women. Homosexuals are in the minority and are shunned because of this, it is wrong and people need to educate themselves to the realities of the world. Well done for writing a great essay highlighting these issues! top marks!
    • 08/12/2004
    • 14:56:51
    • Score: 2 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice essay!

    well structured, good analysis and a really nice read!
    • 06/12/2004
    • 12:43:25
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Euthanasia

    This is nice but it seems to be more of a personal account of your experience of euthanasia rather than an essay examining the issue. Your spelling and grammer could also do with a brush up. It would be good though, if you make the distinction between a personal experience and an essay.
    • 03/12/2004
    • 09:09:17
    • Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    A very short report but nicely done. My only advice is that I would make a distinction between rapists and men in general:"Men take their strong, masculine image and use it to their advantage"is a bit of a generalisation and some people might take offence at that.I thought this report was good though. :)
    • 03/12/2004
    • 09:06:46
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Abortion

    Great essay! My only criticism is that your structure was rather strange, but on the whole I thought this was extremely informative.I am pro-choice on the issue of abortion but I have to say that you did a great job presenting the other side of the argument at the start of your essay by describing abortion techniques. I thought that was very powerful and persuasive.Well done!
    • 30/11/2004
    • 08:21:46
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    this is a good essay, well done!
    • 29/11/2004
    • 09:20:25
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.