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  • Oops!

    Yes. This wasn't really a paper that I spent much time on..
    • 01/12/2005
    • 01:13:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Your story is wonderful

    I love you story. Its descriptive, and interesting
    • 28/05/2005
    • 13:20:13
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I like how you express you feelings and also explaining how most teenaged females are common to eating disorder. The only two parts i didn't really like was the first paragraph...with the repeatment of "Everyone except Helena." which became a little annoying and the other paragraph i didn't enjoy was the last paragraph. A little short, and it's not really a conculsion...other than those 2 problems, I loved reading your essay. Good Job!
    • 20/01/2005
    • 15:49:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • To Petra1986

    Yeah...i didn't spend too much time on this, since I wrote this essay the day before it was due for English class..i kind of rushed through it :)
    • 20/01/2005
    • 15:34:05
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great :)

    I love your story. It sounds so good that it's like reading a published book. you should write a book sometime....
    • 06/01/2005
    • 17:14:54
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Great job

    I love your essay..i like how you proved your point..many examples etc.. good job
    • 31/12/2004
    • 14:47:24
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job!

    Very well written..took a while to read, but worth it haha..again good job.
    • 31/12/2004
    • 14:44:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.