1. None of the arguments are backed up by any source.2. No exact dates or time frames are given3. You "believe" too much, try knowing or predicting. It is also very good to relate to similar cases and connect the human reactions.4. Take an approach by both side. The question did not say "take one point of view"This is a very good personal comment/ personal note on the events, but far from an actual essay.
- 09/03/2005
- 01:43:02
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Langauage was alright, but I think there is too much jumping in the paragraphs.i.e.Therefore, it will lack a soul and many good morals that normal humans have.<new paragraph>Some major physical problems clones may experience are age relatedPlus when writing about ethics, use different teachings to address the problem, not only the church. What if the reader doesnt believe in god?
- 24/02/2005
- 22:09:51
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This looks like an advertisement to me. Good language, but this is not an essay! Where are the negative points? Where is the conclusion?
- 24/02/2005
- 00:54:29
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I find this essay quite interesting, even though i do not agree on all the points raised. Also, try copying the essay into notepad first, before releasing it. This should clear most of the formatting errors.
- 24/02/2005
- 00:48:37
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.