You should talk more about the different decisions the priests and the Lamas have to make, not only which clothes they wear. You were also pretty repetitive.
- 21/04/2005
- 16:17:00
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You need to go into more detail about the parts of the plant such as the stomata, or at least talk more about the pollinization process.
- 07/03/2005
- 00:06:16
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This is a very well written essay. one suggestion I do have, however, is that you could add how or why people started playing baseball. It originated in factories while people were on their work break, picked up a rock and made it into a game.
- 18/02/2005
- 13:37:35
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You included almost everything that I could think of about the differences between the two sports. You did however you did leave out one thing, that softball is WAY EASIER than baseball.
- 18/02/2005
- 13:33:40
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Your essay contained a lot of facts, some of which I didnt know about. Like magaskawee said, you should include some cites,
- 17/02/2005
- 15:26:49
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This is a very well written essay and I found it very interesting
- 17/02/2005
- 15:24:47
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