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  • Capital Punishment

    Good effort, but I found some problems with it. Basically, your paper is built around the thesis that you are in support of Capital Punishment. You did provide support, but where's your conclusion. You end with it deterring crime. And, the biggie...capital punishment is inherently wrong because 1) govt behavior becomes like that of a criminal...lowering themselves to the standard of vindictiveness. 2) When so many that are in death row are poor and minorities, doesn't that say something about our entire social system? Poverty, crime, etc.is a cycle and very difficult to break free. Many of these people don't kill because they're natural born killers. They kill because they grew up in an environment of violence, one that is perpetrated by our society! Whose fault is that?
    • 11/03/2005
    • 13:52:32
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Both the Mexican War and the Spanish American War were a direct result in the abusive ways of superior power and influence.

    You did a greath job. If I were a high school teacher, I'd give you an A+. Your thesis or purpose was clear, and each paragraphy supported it.
    • 11/03/2005
    • 13:27:16
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.