I think it is rather short for a paper but I absolutly love the begining opening with a question maybe you could go into detail in the 3 rd paragraph?
- 07/03/2005
- 19:27:57
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i really likked the essaybut i wanted to give you a site to go onto inorder to find more information that you hadent touched on in cloning. WWW.humancloning.org it reallly gets into all of the specifics
- 07/03/2005
- 19:25:34
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I really liked the organization in the essay and you really get the point across but the begining is rather boring maybe start it with a catchier title ? OVer all it was really interesting
- 07/03/2005
- 19:23:29
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throughout the essay i was rather confused it jumps all over the place my number one suggestion is to break it into organized paragraphs and maybe make it longer overall its good
- 07/03/2005
- 19:21:50
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Feminism is a significant theme addressed in many literary works of the contemporary period.Overall i really liked the essay but you need a better hook
- 07/03/2005
- 19:17:21
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