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You might want to state the purpose of the assignment more clearly. As a speech, I think is a great speech. You have nicely avoided the problem of using terminology specific to the computer industry (other than the buzzwords that are widely known). There are various grammatical issues that are present in the essay though, but since this is in a speech format, it doesn't really matter.- 09/03/2005
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