Like Rhonduski said, well written, but a couple mistakes. Most of all, this was a very well written essay. I look forward to seeing more essays by eacurry.
- 09/08/2002
- 17:43:41
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I'm sorry to criticize, but what you would call an essay here seemed to be more of a story. It was a very well writen story, but fact and opinions must be present in the essay. I just saw what was in your eyes. I hope o see more of your writings, but as essays, not stories.
- 09/08/2002
- 17:24:25
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This was an extreamly well written essay. The essays facts and the writers opinions blend in perfectly to form the idea of true writen art.Very well done
- 09/08/2002
- 17:12:46
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Well, I have to admit I liked this essay. Not many people know the history of Charles and this essay helped greatly explain such a history as his. It may just like this essay because I'm a huge fan of Charley, but if I had to say something about this essay, I would say that it is one of the better ones I've seen in my days. My hat is off to you.Emargo
- 31/07/2002
- 02:49:16
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Even though this was a very well writen essay, it does seem at times to just carry on and carry on with no intrest at parts. A writer must remember that an essays first and primary goal is to get the readers attention, then to give the facts and opinions of the report. I saw very little of this, but i did like the way you gave references to your report. I hope to see more of your writings.Emargo
- 30/07/2002
- 14:26:32
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I belive that this was a very well written essay. Not only does it take the writers opinion, but also the opinion of others to create a well based report. This kind of writting shows a type of "work of art" so to speak, and I am pleased to see such a good essay. I hope to see more great essays from this writer.Emargo
- 30/07/2002
- 14:15:52
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I feel that this essay could have been written with a little more heart put into it. You have all the information you need, but I believe that it could have been put together in a better order and with stronger attention getting sentences. Without something interesting said, something that will grab the readers attention, the readers will read the first couple lines of this essay and then turn from it. I am not saying that this essay is bad, it is quite good as a mater of fact, but a story is only as good as its writer.Emargo
- 29/06/2002
- 14:40:21
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I have to say that this essay grabbed my attention quite well. You kept the story as a whole, and not as seperate parts, revieling to be a conclusion of the end. It was very informative, although I believe some sentiences could be joined to bring this story to a more perfect acount. Well written and good luck with your writing.
- 29/06/2002
- 14:33:32
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I would have to say that I liked this report. Robert Frost is one of America's great poets. His words are powerful and mindful, like Bryan Fulwider's poetry. Frost could take any object in life and write a hundred poems about it. His visions are ones that are never forgotten.Emargo
- 27/06/2002
- 07:15:50
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
What you just wrote here is very powerful and strong indeed. It is an attention getter, while still bringing a smooth flowingessay to the reader. You essay here, I believe, is one of your best ones yet and I hope to see more of your great writtings as the time progresses. Emargo
- 22/06/2002
- 16:54:49
- Score: 12 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
I myself have seen this play done by many groups. You discribe it very well in your writings, without making reads not want to see it. Your essay is a very good attention getter and i hope to see more of your writing. Emargo
- 22/06/2002
- 03:45:29
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I like the way you wrote this essay, strongly to the point, but i would like to see for discriptive images put into this essay, just a little more free flowing. At points of this essay, it seems like the story just rambles on and on. Never the less, it is quickly recovered by strong words and great views. Very well done. Emargo
- 22/06/2002
- 03:35:15
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I believe that this essay was well writen and well planed. It shows the facts that the writer has collected, plus the view that the writer has on the facts. When put together, it shows true tallent the the writer is able to display. It grabs attention of readers alike, grabs interest, and informs. This was well written and i hope to see more essays written by this writer.Emargo
- 19/06/2002
- 17:50:27
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
It took me about 3 weeks to write this small essay. Watching my grandfather die because of injuries of the war made each word i wrote even harder than the previous before it. Even though i was unable to present this essay to the class, because of the sarrow i had just repeading it, I recieved a 100% on it, and i believe that my grandfather was very proud of me that day.
- 19/06/2002
- 17:28:11
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.