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  • Intro

    My suggestion is to make the first sentence or two more interesting and eye-catching. The way you started it out causes one to lose some interest in the paper.
    • 24/04/2005
    • 15:22:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice essay

    Nicely written essay... brings up some interesting issues that weren't discussed in class
    • 20/04/2005
    • 01:01:27
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • A suggestion...

    I like the essay... I think it's pretty well written, but some things that you need (in my opinion) are transitions to the next sentence. A lot of your sentences end very abruptly, and turn into a new sentence very abruptly. In my mind it doesn't seem to flow... So take my suggestion for what it's worth =)
    • 26/03/2005
    • 16:23:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Well Written

    This is a very nicely written essay with everything laid out in an easy to read/understand way.
    • 25/03/2005
    • 19:30:01
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely Written

    Another very well written essay.
    • 24/03/2005
    • 15:22:34
    • Score: 18 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Written

    Just wanted to say that this was a very well written essay.
    • 24/03/2005
    • 15:18:25
    • Score: 20 out of 28 people found this comment useful.
  • Indentation

    Use paragraphs or one line spacing between every would be paragraph.
    • 23/03/2005
    • 15:20:02
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice...

    Your paper was a pleasure to read... mentally stimulating xD
    • 22/03/2005
    • 15:07:18
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.