i just learned about this plague in my world class...very interestingbut where did you get all this information? next time try using parenthetical references (teachers love that) and a works cited (a must!).
- 10/04/2005
- 14:30:03
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where did you get all of this information?
- 10/04/2005
- 14:26:45
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that is what most students do. good essay! (no works cited though)
- 06/04/2005
- 21:32:12
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your paper was very nice writte but where is the works cited?
- 06/04/2005
- 21:28:31
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why does the skin get covered with soft haircalled lanugo?i think that your essay had a lot of detail and it was very strong. but next time try using some parenthetical references and never forget about the works cited.
- 06/04/2005
- 21:26:08
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wow, your house sounds amazing. i wish i knew the history to my house... your essay was very interesting.
- 06/04/2005
- 21:07:46
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i still don't really understand why she started crying... but your essay was very good. your conclusion summarized the whole essay.
- 06/04/2005
- 20:03:19
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abortion is a very sad thing, i really don't understand why you would want to kill your own baby/fetus. but since giving birth isn't too safe, i think that you should have an abortion during the first 2weeks of pregnancy if you already know that you do not want the baby, because giving him/her up for adoption is a very difficult thing for the mother.good essay, but some of your paragraphs were too short. good details*
- 23/03/2005
- 22:35:14
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your essay was very interesting.what schools already have those clinics?but i really don't think that it's safe to have birth control available for high school students. it's too dangerous, and it has too many side-affects. but the condom idea is quite smart, even though it doesn't always work...*
- 23/03/2005
- 22:22:02
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you have a strong indroduction and conclusion. the only thing i didn't like about the first paragraph was your repetition of the word 'people'*
- 22/03/2005
- 20:32:21
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is this the last sentence of your essay: "Cannot believe this and quickly gathers the villagers together" ?it doesn't seem complete to me :/
- 21/03/2005
- 23:54:19
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where would one find an amulet?
- 21/03/2005
- 21:38:40
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good thesis statement
- 21/03/2005
- 21:35:18
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interesting essaygood details
- 21/03/2005
- 21:32:44
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.