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  • Interesting

    Overall it is well written, except there is the odd mistake in grammar. You also give your opinion, which makes the piece of work much better.
    • 23/11/2006
    • 10:08:42
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Grammar

    There is an abundance of grammatical errors in this essay.
    • 16/08/2006
    • 07:19:46
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Paragraphs

    Splitting the text into paragraphs would have been nice. It was probably done in the version not submitted but its pretty hard find the seperation of each paragraph in this form.
    • 16/08/2006
    • 07:14:12
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Missile crisis

    Its a decent piece of text but try to give both points of view. It shows a greater understanding of the events and proves that you are capable of looking beneath the surface. Not just fully believing what you read.
    • 12/08/2006
    • 12:24:19
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    On the whole it's pretty good, but try to make the conclusion longer.
    • 20/07/2006
    • 15:54:46
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Top notch

    Extremely good. Except you could have written more in the conclusion.
    • 25/05/2006
    • 12:23:24
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Essay

    Use paragraphs. Otherwise its pretty good and fun to read. But please use paragraphs or is it just one massive typo.
    • 27/04/2006
    • 09:31:27
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Cricket

    Amazing info on Don the Great. Except didn't Lara once make around 500 in a first class game. I think he did but I'm not quite sure.
    • 26/04/2006
    • 09:45:40
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Tip

    Experiments shouldn't be written in first person. As in "I did this" and "I did that". It should be written a formal manner, "Attach the light sensor to the clamp".The only exceptions are during the hypothesis and the Conclusion.Also when stating the method used do it in point form not as a paragraph
    • 20/04/2006
    • 11:23:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Extremely good

    Really good just make sure you state all the sources used at the end.
    • 19/04/2006
    • 07:47:14
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    A very thorough account of the novel.
    • 17/04/2006
    • 07:25:38
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    When an essay is as well reasearched and written as this its really difficult to find many faults.
    • 16/04/2006
    • 06:17:27
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Try to avoid the extra long paragraphs, otherwise the essay is good.
    • 13/04/2006
    • 08:02:09
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Too short

    Surely more could be written on this topic. Also proof read any future work thoroughly.
    • 13/04/2006
    • 07:59:40
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Mistake

    There's an error in the fifth paragraph, second line from the top, first word. Its supposed to read "nucleus" not "nucleolus". Its a pretty major error.
    • 11/04/2006
    • 16:18:46
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • ???

    Try to avoid the extra long paragraphs. Makes this short piece of text look daunting.
    • 11/04/2006
    • 10:56:07
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Too broad

    In my opinion it seems that you haven't adressed the title of your essay sufficiently. There's a narrow title dealing with a specefic issue but you then go on to follow it up with an essay that, in most aspects, fails to deal with that specific topic. In all other respects the essay was really good.
    • 05/04/2006
    • 04:44:08
    • Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Fair

    Well done in trying and almost succeeding (one can always improve) in giving a fair statement of the history in a non biased manner. Good job.
    • 29/03/2006
    • 15:12:38
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • ???

    The factors affecting enzyme activity are listed but then not followed up with detailed information. Not of a good 12th grade standard.
    • 28/03/2006
    • 16:39:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Average

    overall it is ok but the style of writting could be alot better.
    • 09/05/2005
    • 05:48:52
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A good bit of factual history

    We all have different views on the situation in the middle east as well as why and how the creation of Israel came about. This is why I liked the fact that you have not expressed your own views and only sticking to the facts. Although, I feel, you could have witten abit more. Otherwise well done.
    • 03/05/2005
    • 07:57:53
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Space exploration

    Its extremely well written and really interesting. Eventhough it is only for the 8th grade i still feel you could have got quite abit more info in there, and make the essay longer. Otherwise well done
    • 26/04/2005
    • 14:46:30
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Thnx

    Youve started opening my eyes to school and work and i hope you all the best in the future. thnx again
    • 25/04/2005
    • 14:54:56
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice try

    You had a really interesting topic to wright about but im afraid the essay wasnt very well planned or written. you do convey your emotions well though.
    • 25/04/2005
    • 14:48:50
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    its really interesting but the paragraphs seem to be quite repetative as well as the wording and pattern. overall well done
    • 25/04/2005
    • 05:46:46
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    this essay is nothing short of excellent. Its well organised, written and takes care of almost every detail. well done.
    • 24/04/2005
    • 06:06:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good summary

    good summary of the story but i still found it slightly confusing with the names regardless its done really well. A bit more of you own feelings might have been better though.
    • 14/04/2005
    • 06:55:54
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting but lacks detail

    its good but lacks a bit of detail and information, if possible, on why some of these things occur to children. there are also quite a few grammatical errors, especially with the paragraphing.
    • 14/04/2005
    • 06:52:13
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well put together

    Another well written, informative essay and really interesting, especially if you're like the topic. It seems that you have done some good research but refrences would hav been handy. well done
    • 14/04/2005
    • 06:40:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    you definetly know what you're writing about. Informative, really well researched and well strung together. Only a few minor grammatical errors that can easily be fixed. Well done
    • 14/04/2005
    • 06:29:31
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.