User Details For: MJ33

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  • Goo dbut short

    its good but you are missing things, it\'s too short
    • 04/05/2005
    • 17:39:08
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Overall good

    i think overall it was good, you could add a a paragraph and a little more the conclusion
    • 01/05/2005
    • 19:10:07
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • These are facts not an essay

    i think you should start by putting all ur facts together and creating an essay so it can be properly reviewd
    • 01/05/2005
    • 12:02:28
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Too short and it needs some work

    i think it went too fast.. i wasnt satisfied with your introduction, i think the information you put about brown vs. board of edu. should be in a different paragraph
    • 01/05/2005
    • 11:54:11
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.