its good but you are missing things, it\'s too short
- 04/05/2005
- 17:39:08
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i think overall it was good, you could add a a paragraph and a little more the conclusion
- 01/05/2005
- 19:10:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i think you should start by putting all ur facts together and creating an essay so it can be properly reviewd
- 01/05/2005
- 12:02:28
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i think it went too fast.. i wasnt satisfied with your introduction, i think the information you put about brown vs. board of edu. should be in a different paragraph
- 01/05/2005
- 11:54:11
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