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  • Ok.

    This is an okay essay. The grammar keeps the reader from being able to flow through the paper at a comfortable rate. However there are some good facts and with a little work could be a decent paper!
    • 05/12/2005
    • 04:49:43
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Well....

    It seems like this essay was just filling out the essay structure form. You know the one. The 3 mandatory paragraphs, at least 3 sentences per paragraph. Just seems weak... I don't, know just my opinion.
    • 03/05/2005
    • 00:09:37
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative

    I think more teenagers need to read stuff like this! This is a keeper!
    • 03/05/2005
    • 00:05:05
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • High School Paper?

    This is pretty good for a high school paper. It wasn't a topic that we would have covered in HS. If this was a book report it is rather short. I think I would consider this more along the lines of an abstract than a book report. Informative though!
    • 03/05/2005
    • 00:03:17
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hummmm....

    Maybe I will watch the movie now. I was considering it, but after reading this essay I think I will definately watch it now! Thanks!
    • 02/05/2005
    • 23:56:31
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • WOW! Informative!

    That is a very informative essay! I have taken Human A&P and learned a lot from this essay I didn't leran in class! Great Essay!
    • 02/05/2005
    • 23:53:53
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.