Please check the grammar before submitting an essay. All throughout the essay the gramar was horrible. Proof reading can make or break an essay.
- 14/05/2005
- 01:12:14
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I love anything that is simple beauty and this poem is definately that. Very touching, very deep. Good job
- 14/05/2005
- 00:57:30
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very informative, perhaps you could have mentioned meditation in the conclusion when suggesting ways to avoid sleep deprivation
- 13/05/2005
- 07:39:21
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.