Lot's of assignments in my school involve poems, so i don't know what your talkin' about.
- 23/08/2005
- 17:36:03
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great job. I've got no negative comments. I've got a ton of positive ones, but I doub they would all fit in this small little box. Keep up the good work! Oh, and play video games. :)
- 12/08/2005
- 17:54:42
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It was good and all, but you could've thrown in a little Ultra Lord. It would've made it seem more, comical.
- 24/07/2005
- 19:26:15
- Score: 7 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
A bit odd, yet a story nonetheless. It's strange that Link has yet another side to be unveiled to the citizens of Hyrule. 'Link thrust his master sword through Kei, and the fairy fell to the ground writhing in pain. " Oh Link, have mercy!" Link took out his bow, strung five arrows, and fired them into Kei's body. With her final breath, Kei whipped out a bolonga sandwich and whacked Link over the head.The End
- 13/07/2005
- 13:08:26
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I found it difficult to read topped with bad grammar, and it seemed like a massive bunch of sentence fragments shoved together. It tends to be quite irritating. I have nothing more to say. Bleh.
- 08/07/2005
- 20:13:59
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
A good story, as it combines characters from various Harvest Moon games and gives you the feeling the characters are believable. Good job and well done.
- 06/07/2005
- 20:44:01
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I don't know how to explain it in words. It explains everything clearly, and it actually has blood, gore, and violence! I really enjoyed reading it and I'm sure the sequel will be even more enjoyable.
- 04/07/2005
- 20:48:53
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I thought the story was good, yet all of your stories are lacking the action that appeals to many readers. Not that the story was placed in an action genre, but I'd write something just a little more exciting. Just voicing my opinion...
- 04/07/2005
- 19:22:36
- Score: 19 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
I do agree with your point of view, yet the essay was short and you should have provided more examples. And Cheeseman... How can you not have friends just because you play video games all the time. I mean, I play multiplayer with a bunch of my friends, and then we'll go outside and play manhunt for 3 hrs. Not many people sit in front of the screen all day, unless your playing Zelda.
- 29/06/2005
- 09:28:53
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Why do you keep on copying and pasting your essays? Sheesh.
- 28/06/2005
- 11:06:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think the Gamecube has plenty of breathtaking games and lot's of action, yet I am stating this 3 years after this essay was made and long since then Nintendo has improved.
- 28/06/2005
- 07:49:48
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Nice essay. You proved your points in stating that the Gamecube is a living organism, and now I'm a believer. Well done.
- 28/06/2005
- 07:45:01
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
An O.K. essay, yet the grammatical errors sort of ruined it. Take a little more time writing your essays.
- 27/06/2005
- 17:02:06
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I agree with inodaps, as it is a perfect essay. It's not boring, easy to read, and it says "If you use me, good grade shall come to you, it will".- Dark Yoda
- 24/06/2005
- 09:59:40
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
A very good poem. It kind of grasps the reader and makes you want to read more. It was also very creative. Keep up the good work.
- 24/06/2005
- 09:54:15
- Score: 16 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
Your essay provided lots of information. You had a lot on the Playstation, and the NES, but not much on the N64. An excellent essay.
- 24/06/2005
- 09:49:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You examined all angles of the argument in detail, while also giving examples. Good essay.
- 24/06/2005
- 09:42:16
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
How do you know so much inodaps when I know so little... Well, your level of education is much higher...
- 24/06/2005
- 09:32:43
- Score: 10 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
What I don't understand is how the young children acquire the mature video games. Due to some of the new laws passed, it should be kind of difficult to obtain one, unless the parent bought it for them. Just some thoughts...
- 24/06/2005
- 09:27:07
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
There was spelling errors, punctuation errors, capatilization was off, etc., etc., etc.. Besides this, it was a good book report.
- 24/06/2005
- 09:16:10
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
A good essay, yet a few spelling and grammatical errors. And as fwines mentioned is Brosnan not Brosman. An overall good essay.
- 24/06/2005
- 09:11:21
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading your essay, along with the quotes, but one thing left me bummed. Where's Neo? You should have got some super cool quote from him. But, alas, a good essay indeed.
- 24/06/2005
- 09:04:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Besides revlolting... Ah, I cannot explain this in words. It just sickens me. Bleh.
- 24/06/2005
- 08:30:35
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I agree with PhantomPhan on his opinion, and I would like to add that is was good, yet somewhat short. More effects from the seasons would be nice also. Overall a great poem.
- 23/06/2005
- 15:18:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I was at my friends house, and I was writing this essay when I decided to go play some video games. As a prank, he copied and pasted it five times to make it long enough and then submitted it. There's the origin of the decent, yet short essay.
- 23/06/2005
- 14:57:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Another well-written essay. Keep up the good work. Might I add, it was constructed with excellence. Wonderful essay.
- 21/06/2005
- 20:03:13
- Score: 19 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
The only flaw in this essay was the title. It was clearly written in the first paragraph, but other than that, your essay was good.
- 21/06/2005
- 13:48:01
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Not exactly groundbreaking, but I must give you credit for your work. Well done.
- 21/06/2005
- 13:44:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Excellent! Your works baffles my mind over and over again! Keep up the good work!
- 21/06/2005
- 13:39:19
- Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
Another well written essay.
- 20/06/2005
- 20:08:23
- Score: 18 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
Not that I don't agree with your opinion, but you don't have enough information to support your opinion.
- 20/06/2005
- 19:45:48
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You keep on using the same words continuously, such as innovative and difference. Get some better word choice.
- 20/06/2005
- 18:55:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It was easy to read, in-depth, informative, and not boring! I congratulate you on acheving all these standards.
- 20/06/2005
- 14:11:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Blood, Gore, and Violence. What more could we want? Excellent job. But I myself did not think it was good enough to match the education level of a seventh-grader, as I am myself, but, looks like the majority wins on this one.
- 20/06/2005
- 14:04:20
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It was boring, difficult to read, and to short for the topic. Please try again.
- 20/06/2005
- 13:50:53
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Being a fan of ferrets, I highly enjoyed reading your essay, and your opinion was clearly stated. You've convinced me, as this essay proves very in-depth and intruiging, along with all the innovative ideas. Very well done.
- 20/06/2005
- 12:27:34
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A good story. It would go great with some smores. Not the cereal.
- 20/06/2005
- 12:21:36
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I'm sure the crowd agrees with you.
- 20/06/2005
- 12:14:28
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The essay wasn't all seriousness, you added some fun and games in it. I like that in an essay. Especially when their not boring. Two thumbs up.
- 20/06/2005
- 12:02:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This poem tends to entice the reader into it's vast darkness. A very good job on creating the spine-tingling sensation. Odd, isn't it?
- 20/06/2005
- 11:02:02
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very well written! It shows factual information and wasn't boring. And just about the right size. You didn't put a period at the end, but more importantly, who cares. Good job inodaps.
- 20/06/2005
- 10:54:44
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A delightful experience to read! It's length doesn't exactly compare to the size of Mt. Everest, yet it's quest to obtain more points has nevertheless proved fruitful.
- 19/06/2005
- 16:49:16
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very well-written. Excellent grammar and vocab, but I guess that's expected from someone of your level of education.
- 17/06/2005
- 21:54:07
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
nice compare and contrasts. good essay. brilliant.
- 17/06/2005
- 21:43:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
long, long and more long. I didn't even attempt to read it. It was probably good though.
- 17/06/2005
- 21:37:10
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This script-treatment scares me......
- 17/06/2005
- 14:24:17
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You've lost me
- 17/06/2005
- 14:21:25
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Kinda boring but I guess thats expected from the title being discussed.
- 17/06/2005
- 14:19:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It only took me 52 hours and 10 minutes to beat it! Most of the time I just wandered around aimlessly in the temples lost but.......
- 17/06/2005
- 12:30:20
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I have never played FF in my life (probably because I don't have a Playstation and I'm more of a Nintendo fan), but your essay was great and you really convinced me. Great work.
- 16/06/2005
- 21:16:23
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
everything was explained in excellent detail. It was easy to read, factual, and it wasn't boring. You also stated your sources. Well done, and very good essay.
- 16/06/2005
- 21:10:33
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Only immature fools that lack the proper intellect would start swearing over a comment left by the author that clearly had logical reasoning. People like that don't deserve to be on this site. Oh, and good essay johnjjp.
- 16/06/2005
- 21:04:47
- Score: 29 out of 34 people found this comment useful.
There should have been research done on this topic, and it was to miniscule. You should also have listed your sources. If you had any.
- 16/06/2005
- 20:59:09
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I clearly agree with you inodaps, because most of my essays are written from my memory, and my exstensive knowledge of everything. I consider this kind of writing a challenge, but hey. My essays still get accepted.
- 16/06/2005
- 20:52:32
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your comment agrees with my opinion, and as you stated, probably many more people about the world. And I like that. At least I know one person is on the right side of the galaxy.
- 16/06/2005
- 20:49:28
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
it wasn't the easiest to read in some paragraphs, but decentley good.
- 16/06/2005
- 20:40:20
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I do not understand the basis of this essay. To many spelling errors. This is an essay? Please try again.
- 15/06/2005
- 20:42:46
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
As long as the person playing the mature video games are not a bunch of criminally insane juvenile delinquets, then we have nothing to worry about. And many of us are not what I stated above. This essay? Kinda pointless and long and a waste of time to read. Just rambling...
- 11/06/2005
- 21:30:03
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A very well written essay! A few spelling errors indeed, but as long as the essay does not eradicate the reader then we can assume we will be safe.
- 01/06/2005
- 05:59:12
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.