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A MLA paper for the life of Al Capone. Includes works cited and orks consulted.
- 1060 words (4 pages)
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Why genetic engeneering is bad. An opinion paper
- 1224 words (5 pages)
- 113
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How women were treated during the enlightment. A very opiniated paper
- 791 words (3 pages)
- 47
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Weak essay
the essay lacked of the developement of the character. It would of been much stronger if you talked about him and struggoling with his emotions. The book is mainly about him versus the "phonie". If this topic would of been talked about more then the essay would of been much stronger.- 15/08/2002
- 00:28:08
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Very good but not perfect
the book was very well analyze in this essay. You used many examples and payed a great deal of attention to the small details. The only possible thing that you can prove upon your essay is direct quotes from the book. If you would of yoused several direct qoutes from the book it would of been a much stronger essay.- 05/08/2002
- 03:01:40
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.