User Details For: adza28

Essay List
Comments List
  • Nice essay.

    Good but it's hard to keep track of so many texts in one essay.
    • 26/11/2005
    • 19:57:42
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting.

    Maybe worth reading, but the style is somewhat immature. maybe more description is necessary in the parts that are supposed to be 'scary'. also for plot development the eyes, the surgeon, and the news item were somewhat obvious. Although if this was written at a young age its not bad.
    • 04/10/2005
    • 07:00:52
    • Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting Topic.

    I'm curious about freemasonry, good essay but not very informative about what they actually do. Are you a freemason yourself?
    • 29/09/2005
    • 08:58:06
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Very comprehensive on the specific issue.

    An introduction however? For someone like me who's ignorant in the matter, introducing the topic to explain exactly what you're talking about would help me.
    • 15/09/2005
    • 06:16:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice essay

    Well detailed but you could provide more evidence for what you say.
    • 13/08/2005
    • 21:19:46
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Short and to the point

    Concisely written and still interesting
    • 06/08/2005
    • 20:59:25
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • The DET history syllabus does not advocate racism

    The article is about how the Australian government has treated indigenous people - not how they have responded to that. If you want to make the point that Aborigines are treated too well and should receive fewer benefits it's unlikely that anyone would value that idea - and I doubt you're history teacher would appreciate your opinion either.
    • 25/06/2005
    • 09:25:43
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting essay

    Reads a bit like a book review but still good. I disagree with the statement "Being human means being gullible, to an extent." Humans are the least gullible species on the planet, there is no such thing as a cynical animal (only a cautious one).
    • 10/06/2005
    • 07:58:23
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good but very specific

    A brief outline of the text itself could be useful. Good insight to the Paradise and Metamorphoses links.
    • 10/06/2005
    • 07:49:03
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.