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Technology in our changing business world: This is a persuasive essay convincing bussiness professionals to keep up with new technology skills.
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Needs to be stronger
this is a very well organized and detailed paper but, it needs a stronger introduction and conclusion. Something that will catch the readers attention.- 03/06/2005
- 19:26:51
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great but, there are some flaws
You have a few minor grammatical and spelling errors but other than that this is a very descriptive and biased book report- 03/06/2005
- 19:23:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.