U really, indispicably captured the reality of a rape...I love the way u protrayed Christine's life during, and after rape...u expressed everything very well... great job.
- 20/05/2006
- 15:55:14
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good research...
- 26/02/2006
- 18:20:42
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This sounds like an experience you shared urself...the topic itself (spitting) is disgusting but u really played it off...
- 27/12/2005
- 13:50:38
- Score: 7 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
Basically u have one idea repeating itself over and over and yet over again...I like your use of quotes and think u (like John Steinbeck) should take TIME to make this "synopsis" interesting and with less repitition.
- 03/12/2005
- 18:33:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well done...
- 28/11/2005
- 21:29:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
From the way u write, I wood say u're approximately 7-8, so I must congratulate you for writing this comparison for u and Peter Pan...
- 06/11/2005
- 20:20:26
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good job but next time, be more precise and less boring...
- 15/10/2005
- 12:15:38
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
wow, hmmm...and u actually saw everything, the hairs on the back of my head stands...good use of words describing this horrid experience.
- 26/08/2005
- 20:11:14
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
truely amazing...plz update very very soon...i'm thirsty for more!
- 23/08/2005
- 18:41:41
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i understand what u're trying to say but Cheathouse does have a poetry section...its not my fault talk to the admin...
- 23/08/2005
- 10:46:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
wow..interesting, truely interesting indeed
- 23/08/2005
- 10:43:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
wow...is he dead? oh um...interesting...i like your choice of words
- 19/08/2005
- 12:31:51
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Looks like u've found ture love again...good job babygirl.
- 16/08/2005
- 13:19:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
truly awesome...i felt ur pain wen reading this poem...
- 16/08/2005
- 13:13:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this paper was inspired by a true story and it was written by a close friend of mine not me...she did her best so have mercy when u're rating plz
- 15/07/2005
- 18:36:58
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Wow! u blew my mind! i hardly realised some of these things...thanks for making them register for me...It actually just might work
- 15/07/2005
- 18:06:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Kool! Finally i met some1 who adores horror...although the journey took to read this "essay" wasn't smooth, it was ok. ps: Have u ever read Christopher Pike's Last Vampire series? If not then, wat r u waitin' for?LOL
- 15/07/2005
- 14:27:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This paper was well written.Though there were a few grammatical errors the concepts a well captured
- 15/07/2005
- 11:19:09
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
hey guys...um i know this one's quite long but it is vey interesting...it involves blood, gore and everything u want
- 11/07/2005
- 16:02:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i love ur incredible description of the game and u got my attention but in the 5th paragraph, with the arithmatic i was somewat lost...lol...keep up the good job pal...
- 07/07/2005
- 11:26:54
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great use of rhetorical questions.Great persuation.Good job.
- 07/07/2005
- 10:55:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
great viewpoint...well structured.Good job in this creation.
- 07/07/2005
- 10:04:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I just wanna thank all u guys both for your kind words and encouragements...I have been quite busy but i'll try my best to update asap.
- 05/07/2005
- 20:24:54
- Score: 14 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
Hey i love how u structured this essay. I knew u had this potential and i hope u keep it up and put it to full use.
- 05/07/2005
- 20:15:04
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was great.Though it had few grammatical mistakes eg the instead of they; your instead of you're, it rocked higher than many i've read...Great job.
- 05/07/2005
- 12:12:38
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
It doesn't seem like you have much confidence in this essay. I dont think you should've made the remarks u made before the essay starts.--Anyway, at times i felt lost when reading it.But other times it was informative...
- 05/07/2005
- 12:02:40
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed this essay basically because, like you, i'm a fan of games too...anyway, u write good ur vocab and structure are well set
- 04/07/2005
- 14:51:53
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Hi thanks alot fot your kind words and encouragement.
- 04/07/2005
- 14:25:54
- Score: 15 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
Hi everyone...I hope you like this one...plz comment and rate guys.
- 04/07/2005
- 14:24:33
- Score: 15 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
Not bad...well accepted.One advice though, less passive, more active.
- 04/07/2005
- 10:17:21
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
good effort. Sounds interesting...
- 04/07/2005
- 10:15:02
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Hi...ur essay is quite nice but one advice: it could've been more active and less passive.
- 03/07/2005
- 14:53:37
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
very nice essay...u created a whole new interesting interpretation.Tanx alot...good job
- 03/07/2005
- 14:21:03
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Your essay was good.It looks like your time( 52 hrs 10 mins) paid off by what you have learned from this game. Good job!
- 03/07/2005
- 13:39:20
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Hey, i liked this essay. By the way, every1 makes mistakes (and pulls pranks.) Dont stress on that, your essay came out strong (x 5)LOL...and it did advised me of the results of cheatin'
- 03/07/2005
- 13:32:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You wrote powerfully. You are extremely unique in the way you write. Very Well accepted...
- 02/07/2005
- 12:39:56
- Score: 16 out of 23 people found this comment useful.
An extremely well written essay. As usual, u are very good at capturing and maintaining the attention of ur reader.Oh yes, it was very informative and contain classic narration.Good job.
- 02/07/2005
- 12:36:25
- Score: 43 out of 49 people found this comment useful.
Hello...i really liked the structure and organisation of this essay.It flows very well in transition, and is indepth and i liked your closing paragraph.Keep up the great job...2 tumbs up!!!
- 02/07/2005
- 11:59:23
- Score: 18 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
hi guys, i'm the writer of this essay and i know that you might think its boring but, thats just the starting. To really enjoy this story you have to read it FULLY.This is funny.Especially the ending, that's quite hilarious.
- 30/06/2005
- 16:49:32
- Score: 13 out of 14 people found this comment useful.