This essay starts out very intriguing but has no finish to it. If you want to leave the ending open, at least exapand another paragraph or two. Maybe on what happens around her while she realizes she feels more alive.
- 20/07/2005
- 12:40:13
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This is more like a cut-out form a lecture than a paper...it has no focus on anything in particular!
- 14/07/2005
- 11:01:56
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This essay is very well written. It would have been even better if it addressed the personality of the socnd born or subsequent bron siblins, not just the first born child.
- 14/07/2005
- 10:56:42
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