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  • Good job.

    This is great!! lots of information is provided. The first paragraph was a great hook you explained exactly what you planned on talking about then dove right in. One thing, do you have any sources you got your information from, and maybe you could talk about solutions to the problem. over great essay!!!
    • 03/09/2005
    • 10:31:37
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • OK.

    Your paper was ok. It has lots of facts about overpopulation but you didnt offer any way for it to get better, a solution. if you added a solution i think this paper would be great. You have good ideas just go from there.
    • 02/09/2005
    • 17:29:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice job.

    I like this paper alot. I dunno how to describe is but it seems that you connected with your reader and I like that you provided a problem and a solution!! Also, the begining paragraph really hooked the reader in. However you should cite your sources more in the paper.
    • 02/09/2005
    • 15:04:46
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.