Consider organizing your essay more properly and it'll be good.
- 21/09/2008
- 01:02:18
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onvinhtan: essays don't necessarily have to be longer to be better. long essays may be crap too you know,good essay all round.
- 21/09/2008
- 01:01:23
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don't be religious
- 21/09/2008
- 00:59:04
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You could improve on your punctuation in the later part of your essay, especially during the dialogue parts.
- 13/02/2007
- 03:37:36
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Great job dude. Nice structure done, fully explained. Keep the articles coming in.
- 24/08/2005
- 03:43:56
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http://www.cheathouse.com/essay/essay_rate.php?p_essay_id=62449&p_rating=goodHey there. Well article written. Good explanation done. Good work dude.
- 24/08/2005
- 03:40:51
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Beautiful essay you've written here. Very well explained. Well done dude.
- 24/08/2005
- 03:37:34
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Although this poem is still average, i do not think that poems should be considered as essays. Poems should be written elsewhere and not on CheatHouse.
- 23/08/2005
- 03:38:39
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My opinion on this article is that the executions should not be televised, mainly due to these few reason. One, by showing these acts, children will be afraid. Two, they are already being executed, so if we televise these acts, it will embarrass their family even more. Three, the whole world would know about this and look down on their family. By the way, great article.
- 23/08/2005
- 03:35:20
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Good article about Mental Illness. You are a person who can debate, and this has changed my opinion on mental illness. One bad point about this article, omit the "Dear ladies and gentleman, etc" and "Thank you", then this article would be better.
- 22/08/2005
- 03:44:12
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This article is good, however, all the bits and details should be compressed into one or a few paragraphs. Good try though!
- 18/08/2005
- 03:02:26
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This article displays your interest in that particular career. It is good in a sense you express yourself, but more work needs to be done. Try harder!
- 18/08/2005
- 02:24:16
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