Very interesting, to see the different perspectives portrayed upon the greek hero, Icarus. Just a thought that, would make your writing more interesting if you made a little reference to Musee De Beaux, in the conclusion :) Overall, a good solid essay.
- 10/06/2006
- 03:09:30
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A little disappointed that this is not an essay, but really good for readers who are studying the novel :) Also, very helpful for taking footnotes. Good job.
- 01/06/2006
- 05:50:37
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Thanx, I read your essay well, Although I believe that you can grade the efficiency of language.It's just differenciating perspectives:D
- 07/05/2006
- 05:06:44
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Must be kidding me.
- 07/05/2006
- 04:48:36
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It was very interesting to read your report on Dell, his business-maintenance ability and cunning ideas just amazes me. It seems that school academics and qualifications are not the only way to success. Dell does make a perfect leader of this era.
- 04/05/2006
- 18:35:32
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"Just because a law is made doesn't mean it is going to be obeyed." Your point of argument is perfectly understandable, as many youth today ignore the law and drink. But we must surely, at least assume, that law which is made is obeyed by the citizens; if your perspective was correct, god knows where we will end up being.Also, this possibly cannot be an essay, or a report, it does not hold any form of structure.
- 15/04/2006
- 10:21:54
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Made spelling mistakes myself, ironic, as I was flaming ur spelling mistakes :(Pharaoh's plural form is Pharaohs, and speeling, obviously meant spelling :)
- 15/04/2006
- 10:16:26
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"had a lasting effect on both there world and the future world." ovbiously u meant "their" instead of "there", little mistakes which rectify ur meaning :("The pharoses of Egypt" spelling mistake,pharaoses (X) / Pharaohes (O)"Witch was where the people invented the farming plow" Witch ????
- 15/04/2006
- 10:13:02
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Very dense in info. and clearly evokes your depth of knowledge of the two texts ;) welldone.
- 09/04/2006
- 09:10:40
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One of the few essays I've read in Cheathouse that is dense and critical that you have to be thanking you. You should really pay your tutor more, if he exsists :) Good job.
- 03/04/2006
- 02:45:37
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Thankyou, helped me a lot :)
- 03/04/2006
- 02:39:49
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Nice context, and you got the themes correct, however the depth of your knowledge of the poem seems to be very shallow.You should include more `apsects` such as, the sound effects of caesurae, and fragmented verses, which imply the "shattered statue of stone.""Near them, on the sand, Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown, And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command," (Notice the frequent use of punctuation to fragment the verse ;) )Through his poem, Shelley implies man's transient nature and our insignificance over the power of time and nature; we too become a part of nature. Ozymanidas is a figure representing all mankind, conveying our fragile lives.Also it's interesting to understand the background of the poet, at the time of writing this poem. His wife dies of a fatal disease, while he loses his rights over his children by law. He loses everything and he also becomes infected by a fatal disease. Ozymandias is a cry of Shelley lashing out against life and mankind, complaining the nihility and meaninglessness of life and one's accomplishments ;)
- 14/03/2006
- 06:27:12
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And all this whole `war-thing` would have never had happened, if anyone had bought his goffam paintings ;) Hope u get the joke..Good job :D
- 12/03/2006
- 08:27:08
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I personally never had interest in Philippines' edu/eco and politics ;)I find some interesting, very well presented. Good job.
- 12/03/2006
- 08:24:55
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Some `deep` knowledge u presented here;) I personally enjoyed reading ur essay, as well as D.Brown's Book. A bit of a shame, that he is being accused of plagarism of the `Holy Grail ;(`
- 09/03/2006
- 05:28:37
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This is very interesting, never thought of Antlantis as a serious topic before. Hmm I will research myself some info, and I'd message u if u want ;)Fascinating..
- 09/03/2006
- 05:20:59
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The marriage business in Hindu and Catolicism is very interesting ;)Personally enjoyed reading this. Although I heard Arranged Marriage comes into this as well?
- 08/03/2006
- 22:33:20
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Other than these `words` having to describe the "many aspects of the play", as you have written; this oxymoronic phrase implies the protagonist(Macbeth)'s inverted sense of moral and his consciousness.Throughout the play, Macbeth becomes so morally confused, that he relies on the "apparitions" of evil, and seeks guidance and comfort throught it.Fair is Foul.. Foul is Fair strongly suggest the instigator's flaw of confusion.
- 08/03/2006
- 07:57:49
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Mansfield's stories are written on themes such as the oppression of females under the expectations of the society. She is an omnious impressionist, who writes very subtly.I personally think, perceiving Stanley.B as a positive figure is wrong. If you read the Prelude or at the Bay, they subtly convey the pessimistic ideas of females' lack of autonomy in life.
- 08/03/2006
- 07:36:30
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It's a well written essay, as TickledPink has pointed out. However, the essay would have been more effective, if diction such as manipulation, totalitarian were used.(diction which depicts the russian communism)
- 08/03/2006
- 07:24:42
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This writing is very ambiguous, and at the same time, lacks depth or meaning in the writing.Very obscure writing. Though, it does remind me about the `FOB` business, when immigrantswere called it, Fresh Off Boat.
- 08/03/2006
- 00:14:19
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Nice piece of critical analysis, ;) even though, there are some points of disagreement, but that's totally up to the readers ; ) Good job.
- 08/03/2006
- 00:08:57
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A poet who specializes in creating his own mythology in animals..good essay :)
- 04/03/2006
- 05:17:43
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Good comprehensive essay ;) really helps me grasp on some of the themes of the play. Good job.
- 04/03/2006
- 05:10:26
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Good piece of critical writing.
- 23/02/2006
- 19:57:51
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The essay itself is very formal, and detailed :D Thanks for your effort, helps me a lot :D
- 22/02/2006
- 01:57:32
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an impressing piece of work, makes me want to read the poem again :D
- 22/02/2006
- 00:49:12
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An essay revealing the huge amount of effort you have put in.Would be more interesting, by also writing and opposing views from the differentiating perspectives of people who are atheist, and such.Recommend books by Dan Brown and Joe Widderton.
- 20/10/2005
- 01:38:33
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Almost has the sense of paraphrasing the play, relevant ideas are explored, however too frequent repetition of ideas.
- 11/09/2005
- 06:52:59
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