I like this essay. Even though most people would say the words the writer choose to use are not proper English and would disregard this essay, I like the choice of words and the combination of them. I can actually picture being in the mosh pit, being thrown to the ground, and have the people around me to stop for that slipt second to help me up. The organization is good. Transitive words are used correctly. I really enjoyed reading this essay.
- 23/09/2005
- 23:26:13
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.