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  • Very good.

    Very good, good examples. On the whole, I'd say a 5/5. Thumbs up to you.
    • 09/10/2005
    • 02:51:16
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not that bad at all...

    Not bad at all. No real criticism, but you could have added a bit more clarity to the end. But very good; for such a short story, everything was pretty well developed, dialect was used, but I must complain that you used "ur", and not "yer" or something else...
    • 09/10/2005
    • 02:47:19
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  • Hmm...

    This wasn't that bad, but as SerenaDang said, you focused too much on the book's content alone. Next time, try to tell people why they should read it, and what you liked about it.
    • 09/10/2005
    • 02:42:50
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.