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  • Too many paragraphs!

    Your article written on New Years is greatly detailed and a charm to read to oneself. However, I spotted the need to keep scrolling down the page which was a turnoff. I recommend you blend a couple of 'your' paragraphs together and write a new article with less paragraphs.Overall, an ok essay.
    • 15/05/2006
    • 18:55:10
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  • Thoughts.

    Very well written and detailed. Could use more information from this site:http://geography.about.com/library/maps/blrussia.htm
    • 08/10/2005
    • 20:50:13
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