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  • Death Penalty.

    Good as a whole. More attention to the 'pro' side would have been nice. "I" should never be used in a collegiate paper. Could 'flow' a little better. Religion is metioned, but you don't reconize the fact many people are atheist (sp?)
    • 13/10/2005
    • 19:43:05
    • Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Poor.

    Sentences don't flow, no coersion. Just rambles on. There is no substance of form to it.
    • 13/10/2005
    • 19:29:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.